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fitzsgirl

The Worlds's Greatest Lover---Chapter 13

Jun 06, 2008 18:36

Chapter 13

Vicki continued to stare at Mary and Jessica stunned that the two women were safe and, from what she could tell, in relatively good shape. Her mind replayed the bloody scenes found in both of their homes. She thought to herself No one can live with that much blood loss. Finally her voice caught up with her head and she voiced her ( Read more... )

blood ties; vampires; henry fitzroy; vic

Comments 13

remey74 June 6 2008, 22:47:54 UTC

oh please say that there is more or at the least a sequeal

fitzsgirl June 6 2008, 22:49:31 UTC

Well I guess that all depends on the fans of this story. Do you want more? If so, I am sure that I can accomodate.

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! remey74 June 6 2008, 23:31:52 UTC

my kids are out for summer break please i need more

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fitzsgirl June 6 2008, 23:51:41 UTC

Thanks. We all like to have a little romance in our lives, especially when it involves Henry. LOL!!!

skittellgirl June 7 2008, 11:42:11 UTC

That was a wonderful chapter! It can't be the end! Thank you for this (if only my muse would be cooperative).

fitzsgirl June 7 2008, 15:43:43 UTC

Thank you, Thank you. I am sure that your muse will come around soon enough. I love your stories so I hope that you post soon. I am glad that you have enjoyed my story.

deepest_dark June 7 2008, 14:40:16 UTC

OMG!
AWESOME WONDERFUL!
Just one question..its not the end right?
More episodes..i mean chapters ..please :))

fitzsgirl June 7 2008, 15:42:31 UTC

Thank you. No I am going to continue with another chapter and sequel. I couldn't stop it there. I have had too many requests to continue it.

deepest_dark June 7 2008, 17:02:18 UTC

Yaay!
I'm very glad to hear that!
You really do seem to write episodes rather than chapters, if that makes any sense, i can't explain it any better than that.
I look forward to more :)

fitzsgirl June 7 2008, 18:06:04 UTC

Oh. I know what you mean. I like to write the stories the way that I would want to see them protrayed in the series, so I am sure that is why my writing style seems to flow the way that it does.

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fitzsgirl June 7 2008, 19:57:28 UTC

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic reply. It makes me happy that you are enjoying my story so much. I do plan to have more to this story, as well as, a sequel. Stay tuned.