Continuing Saga--Life After Deep Dark

[fitzsgirl]

Chapter 12

As Henry and Vicki made there way back to the condo, both of them sat in silence contemplating the previous week’s events and looking forward to what the night would hold for them.  Vicki turned to look at Henry and finally broke the silence.

“I knew that you would not give up on me.  In my heart, I held on to the hope that you would find

Comments

Thank You

[bludtizfan]

That was Soooo Gooood. Especially liked the romance and the way you handled it. It was erotic not pornographic. Left some things to the readers imagination and that was a nice touch. Very Well Done.

Re: Thank You

[fitzsgirl]

I appreciate your kind words. For this chapter, I really wanted to show true intimacy between Henry and Vicki vs just raw sex. I think that it speaks more to their true nature.

[henrylover2003]

Love it and can't wait till there is more.

[fitzsgirl]

Thanks. I have to start thinking about my next story.

LOVED it !

[vitch36]

Now thats.... HOW it should have ENDED !!!
Very Good !

~ v ~

Re: LOVED it !

[fitzsgirl]

Thanks. I knew my fellow BT fans would like it. Vicki and Henry always deserve a happy ending.

[ravenboo]

Very nicely written !, this is how it SHOULD have been :D

Thanks

[fitzsgirl]

It means alot that this story has been so well received. I had alot of fun writing it. Please check out my new story "The world's greatest lover." It is the next installment after Continuing Saga, and picks up were that story ended. So far, I have posted 2 chapters.

Re: Thanks

[ravenboo]

Welcome :D. I will go read and comment right now :D

[vivichick]

*gasp* so beautiful. Such a wonderful ending! So sweet and moving. Thank You. This was a perfect ending.

[fitzsgirl]

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed it.