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fitful_fire

The As-Yet Untitled Fiction

Nov 01, 2010 23:06

So these are the first words I write for NaNoWriMo. Feel free to read them at your leisure.

The scene is short--almost awfully so. But it exists, and legitimizes my plans to win this year.

Do tell me what you like/dislike. I really don't give a damn one way or another, but I do appreciate the words of friends, whether in correction or praise. You're ( Read more... )

nanowrimo, fiction, pwc

Comments 8

magicmumu November 2 2010, 04:37:16 UTC

Whoa-ho-ho! I liked this. I liked it because it really can stand alone, but the fact that there is more is so exciting that I am leaning back with my arms closed (after I type this, of course) waiting for more. I can't wait to see who these characters are, where they came from and where you will take it from here, because its really really really awesome. I mean, really.

Erin

fitful_fire November 2 2010, 11:42:55 UTC

...I am somewhat hurt that you are surprised that you'd like this. Man, now I have the sniffles...-cries-

Nah, I'm just frakkin' with ya.I'm glad to know that someone out there wants more, aside from just a word-count. I shall do my best!

-salutes-

magicmumu November 2 2010, 15:59:15 UTC

Well, if there aren't two chicks kissing right away or the promise of such, I tend to get distracted by -Ooh, bottlecap!

Kidding. Yeah, word count is usually the last thing I care about in fic. I am usually like 'just uh... keep it short' when I have to answer that part in a fic request and it asks for word count.

Erin

fitful_fire November 2 2010, 17:13:15 UTC

I guess that's part of what i like about the WriMo. it challenges us to strive for length. Something I definitely have an issue with.

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PFT amacina November 3 2010, 00:59:53 UTC

HARP, HARP, HARP.

IT WAS HORRIBLE AND I HATED IT, LIKE WHERE WERE THE VAMPIRES? AND WHY DIDN'T THEY SPARKLE, OMG!!!!!!

I lie.It was good. Good as always.Great as always. :3 Mite bit of confusion on how she was hit in the very first time she got hit, I wasn't sure if it was a slap, or a punch or whatever. I do get she doesn't see it, but maybe try to clarify a little? Other than that, wonderful! :3

Re: PFT fitful_fire November 3 2010, 01:03:45 UTC

i love your icon, dani. where do you find these kickass icons?

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i 'preciate it.

Re: PFT amacina November 3 2010, 01:08:15 UTC

I'm just specially amazing like dat. These awesome things come to me cause they like my awesomeness.

Oh, and don't worry about fixing dat error. It's NanNo, just draft writing, so it's not gonna be perfect. I know mine ain't at all!! Just write a note of it and let it go. Like I did with the crap known as my prologue. DX