Kiss from a rose - Uruha/Aoi

[fishisbad]

Chapters: Oneshot (drabbleish)
Genre: Humor, Romance
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: A rose by any other name, would smell as sweet.
Word count: 320
Disclaimer: I'm in no way affiliated with the GazettE or PS Company.
Characters are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people is purely coincidental.
Comments: Sequel to Just let me.

BIG HUGE THANKS to heygeorge

Comments

[gazerotica]

from crack to sweetness *squeeee!*

[fishisbad]

Yes, funny how things turn up that way. Thank you for all your comments!

[ritsumatsu]

Uruha certainly didn’t want to see almost fully naked wet Aoi. No, he certainly didn’t. OMFG I almost died laughing when I read that line! You are awesome! :)

[fishisbad]

Thank you, I was aiming for a little bit of funny :)

[xxshamisen]

*dead from the fluff*

You, madam, just made my morning. ♥

[fishisbad]

I'm glad I could be of service to you :)

[cork_skrewed]

The ending was very cute; I love how Uruha is nervous about what Aoi will do, and how Aoi is timid when he asks to kiss Uru. =3

But OMG, the second last paragraph. As soon as I read 'Doing it over a shower' well actually just 'doing it' my mind went completely the wrong way. XD I read that paragraph like it was in a fic that was very differently rated ;) and then I had to read it again properly, while trying to remember that they were washing hair and nothing else. =P My poor brain is in smut mode this morning. I read everything wrong. XD 'Half naked Aoi, bent over a sink, Uruha partly bent behind him' *smacks brain* 'Silent and compliant Aoi' O.O *is shot*. Uruha's pervy thoughts didn't help either. =P There's more, but I'm going to stop dirtying the comments now. xD

But yea, porn aside, I thought this was a good sequel. I liked the details like the bathroom being small, and how water droplets dripped onto Aoi's chest. That is one hot image...Omgsh brain, stop!

I think I should go wash my brain with Uruha soap now. =P I

[fishisbad]

ROFLMAO, don't worry your not usually pervy brain is always welcome here. I'm happy because you pointed those lines out because I wanted it to sound like that, to give slightly pervy images while in fact they were doing a completely innocent thing such as washing ones hair.

Really, thank you for your thoughts (yes, the pervy ones too ;)) and pointing out the details you liked, it makes me think I've done something right. And I share your thoughts about Aoi's chest :)

[cork_skrewed]

Haha, I did suspect that you made it sound like that on purpose, but I was also thinking what if I've just read (and written >.>) too much smut and I'm imagining things? =P Either way, I was severely shocked and disappointed at my brain for what it was imagining. ;) (Ok, so maybe I lied slightly, and my brain is quite far down in the gutter. My soul is innocent though? LOL)

Nice wordplay though, as I said, I read more things in a dirty way than I mentioned in my 1st comment. Shall I say another one? 'Uruha’s fingers quickly rubbing' Oh gosh x.x I'm totally smutifying your comments page. XD

Glad to share my thoughts. ^^ And yes, you have done something right. xD I love how these two fics (the hair series?) are short and yet very effective, with just the right amount of detail and description. (I always wish I could write short fics. My drabbles end up three pages long.) So well done! ^^

[fishisbad]

Oh, believe me this is a product of me reading too much smut too. The hair series, that sounds nice :) I actually hated myself for not being able to write longer stuff. But I'm coming to terms that it is just how my writing seems to be at the moment. So you should be happy that you have the ability to write long drabbles.

[drunkelnatt]

...and right after I replied to that comment, lol.

OMG, I LIKE THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. Uruha's in denial!!!!!!! He's always in denial, honestly. But~ *gasps* Aoi bent over the sink with Uruha's crotch rubbing his ass hip and Aoi's not humping the sink???!!!!

And I thought with all that grease, Uru should be like... shampoo, wash, rinse, shampoo, wash, rinse, shampoo, wash, rinse. In that order. And where's whistling!Uruha?! He should be blissfully happy that he gets to wash and rub his crotch Aoi's hair~!

Sorry for the spam. XDDDD

[fishisbad]

LOL, I just saw your comment after replying to the first one.

I'm glad you liked it. Although I must say, damn! I love your ideas. Aoi humping the sink and Uruha shampooing, washing, rinsing, shampooing, washing, rinsing, shampooing, washing, rinsing Aoi's hair. That never occurred to me, but it is genius. I'm sorry there was no whistling Uruha. He turned more panicky then blissful when he realized in what position has he gotten himself into :) But things usually don't turn out the way you expect them too, do they? I'm referring to the sequel but could be applied to Uruha too :)

Thank you for reading!

[drunkelnatt]

Ahahaha! Well, of course I like this one, too! I like how it sounds like it's obscene when Uruha's just washing Aoi's hair, lol. My brain's pervy right now, haha! But... Aoi generally provokes the dirty side of my brain, so I'm sorry if I gave you pervy ideas, lol. Although... I do understand Uruha's position. I would've been panicking too if I were to wash the hair of the person that I like... lol.

And difference is good! XDDD Can I expect more writing from you? Haha!

[fishisbad]

Oh, yes. Pervy was my intention, I loved playing with words doing it and bent over :) Aoi doesn't help my brain either.

I sure hope you can expect more writing from me, but I never know when the idea will strike me and will I be able to put it on paper or you know computer screen. It is a struggle. But this two stories are finished, I don't expect more coming from them. Their two last lines came in a set.