Saaave Me

[fishingforboots]

Honestly. I have far too much free time. Still no job yet, though it looks like my final application is going to pan out. It's a less than desirable job, but I will take almost anything that isn't retail or restaurant. Plus, I'm pretty sure all the High-schoolers have taken those jobs. Every job is looking for a full-time hire, wants more

Comments

[captainrosie]

Oh! That was too sad for words!

I love your Tortured!Ichigo and good old, grounded Grimmjow being fantastically cute in a really tough way. Ugh, the way you write these two makes me die - in good way ^.^

And, all dialogue? Brilliant! It could turn out so corny and wrong, but it isn't at all. You have a way with words that gets everything across without having to clinicise it.

Keep writing!

- rosie

[clinicly8insane]

*munches on your fic* So umm... ILU because this is what I love. I love needy Grimmjow because needy Grimmjow is Greedy Grimmjow in reality, and Greedy Grimmjow is well... OBVIOUS. (if that makes sense). I dunno, I just think that... not enough people think that Grimmjow can be greedy/needy about something. But I am sure he can. If he WANTS something bad enough, then he'll make sure he gets it.

And Ichigo.. yes.. yes yes. He has a large stick up his bum a lot when it comes to things about love (because of his mother, as you have it). So this fic is TOTALY understandible!!! THANK YOUOU@ ^_^=

[tangerine_haze]

Grimm and Ichi are so simmilar it's funny. I had to stop a few times and count from a comment I "knew" was definitely Grimm or Ichi's to make sure who was saying what! And that wasn't because your writing confused me that was 'cause they talk and act so much alike I could imagine either one of them saying a particular line. They are so made for each other!

[ryuuzakilove]

I really enjoyed that! Esp the last line...XD

[kamikaze43v3r]

awww no descriptions of them doing it? oh well my imagination does the work automatically XDD love!