I like all of these and love the structure you chose, how you tied in the words of the poem with the personality of the characters... I think my favorites are Monday, Tuesday, and Friday... did I just imagine that Mark was hitting on Tristram? I love the last line of Tuesday, the hint there of a character defined by more than looks or birth or bearing... wisdom is a trait so often associated with Merlin, I like the idea Jenny would seek it.
Wednesday is so sad and full of the shape of things to come, and Saturday makes me feel sorry for Cai. Thursday is so eager, so hopeful, so bright after Wednesday. And Sunday made me grin.
Cai maintains that it's about damn time someone appreciates him. Maybe Mark, his sister and his best friend were closer than Tristram thought and he missed the hitting on. He'd miss that if he was off in music land or wherever. :P Jenny seemed to come to me suddenly and Elaine...well that's been bothering me for weeks now and I needed a way to get this out. And Din? is an idiot but we love him lots? At least Cai loves his former squire. (How Cai managed to get a squire when he's not doing active duty...well that's anybody's guess!)
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Wednesday is so sad and full of the shape of things to come, and Saturday makes me feel sorry for Cai. Thursday is so eager, so hopeful, so bright after Wednesday. And Sunday made me grin.
I like them all. A job well done. Be proud :)
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Thanks very much!
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