Title: Dark Twilight Author: marishaten Genre: General Warning: None Universe: Canon Rating: K Word count: 712 Summary: Kagome is left to deal with the carnage after yet another visit from Kikyou.
Wonderful exploration of what Inuyasha feels after a visit with Kikyou. I loved how you had Kagome try to reassure him and then end up reassuring herself at the end. And the bit with Shippou spying on them and seeing them hug was great. Bet they can expect some teasing in their future. Beautifully written, great job.
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I was thinking of writing a songfic that would be a montage of their intimate moments, but it didn't pan out so I thought I'll try a more ironic interpretation. I'm glad you liked it! And yes, they'd sure be teased a lot by the group! hehehe...
A nice job of showing the feeling between the two of them. Kagome keeps too much inside her. If only she had expressed her feelings like this things would have been so much better between them
Yep, it never hurts to clear the air. Thank you so, so much for the lovely review! It put a huge smile on my face. I'm really glad you liked the interaction between the characters.
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