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Jul 04, 2009 16:29

Title: The Devil Machine
Pairing: GRI (it's in there) and blink and you'll miss it ToDae
Author: firingsquads aka Kelly
Rating: er...pg-13 for implied cursing and "mild" violence against machines (and a little suggestive conversation?)
Summary: In which Kwon Jiyong proves that he will very probably die when the machines finally take over ( Read more... )

pairing: gri, fandom: big bang, rating: pg-13, oneshot

Comments 22

bluemonkiesx July 4 2009, 21:20:12 UTC

"creepily" dedicated to me?
D<
why "creepily"?
ROFLROFL.

that's happened to me before too. minus Seungri being all sexy there tho.
BUT WHEN THE SODA CAME OUT, AN EXTRA ONE CAME WITH IT.
roflroflrofl.

<3333333

veritas_vincit_ July 4 2009, 21:45:00 UTC

haha creepily because i was sure you weren't AWARE of my writing journal (since i juuuuust made it) and i realized i posted the story under THAT instead of my reg. user name...and there's nothing more creeper than some random person just dedicating crap to you.

*huff*

and i'm also kinda creepy >.<

OH AN EXTRA SODA WOULD HAVE BEEN BOMB!

bluemonkiesx July 5 2009, 01:34:44 UTC

o. ROFL.
I totally didn't even look at the name of the poster. I just looked at the name by "author".
so, I fail.
XD

OMG. I WAS SO JUICED WITH THE EXTRA SODA. I totally did a little dance, and this guy passing by looked me like I was crazy.
.___.

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:03:20 UTC

dude, i did the "crack crack crack crack" dance while crossing the street yesterday and the guy at the stop light asked if i was okay.

:(

mangalover93 July 4 2009, 22:27:59 UTC

hahahahaa ji yong is funny :D
wait for the maknae to fix it :P
thanks for sharing ^^

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:02:15 UTC

thank YOU for commenting!
(it's good to know people actually read)

♥

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:18:06 UTC

also! thank you thank you for marrying Seungri and Jiyong

*swooooon*

cindyxmc July 4 2009, 23:34:14 UTC

OH GOD, SEUNGRI YOU TEASE! LOL
and omg, i laughed throughout the whole thing.
jiyongie is fighting a vending machine! HAHAHAHA
THAT IS EPIC FAIL ON JIYONG'S PART!

oh God oh God oh God,
just let me calm down, LOL
oh mann! this is seriously hilarious.

and and, MORE PLEASE?
I DEMAND MOAR! xDD

<333333333333

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:00:08 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment!!

I'm SO beyond glad you enjoyed it! I'm even more happy you laughed (hopefully WITH the fic, and not at it!!)

it's more epic fail on my part though if you think about it, because it's based off real events >.<

i'm actually thinking of doing a whole line of fics where Ji loses to technology.
maybe issues with pop-ups while looking at porn??

haelin July 5 2009, 10:37:58 UTC

SPOT! my radar failed me.. well no, school did.. that's why i'm late and was beaten by Cindy and Mai on commenting first.. will read this when i get home..

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:04:50 UTC

haha school fails me aaaaaaall the time when it comes to fics. (i'm very excited!)

haelin July 6 2009, 02:12:44 UTC

YOU ARE SOOO ON THE RIGHT TIMING COZ I JUST FINISHED READING THIS AND YES I LOVE IT! JI VERSUS THE VENDING MACHINE!!

it happened to me too.. but it wasn't a stranger who helped me out though.. I was sooo embarrass coz it was my *cough* crush who helped me out..

THANKS FOR SHARING!!!

*hugs*

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:20:41 UTC

ooooh failing in front of the crush...that's always rough! i do it all the time, so no worries. we can form some kind of support group if you'd like!

*hugs back!*

Thread 5

so_much_kimchi July 5 2009, 14:52:19 UTC

I love this, I love this! More comedy to the G-ri shippers! Humour makes the world go around when angst doesn't, and this was wonderfully written! The terminator quote alone is enough to make me tuck this into memories~~ Again, adore this!

veritas_vincit_ July 6 2009, 02:11:43 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ...and the fact that you think it's funny makes my heart smile. AH! your comment is making me grin like a fool! Thank you so much!

OH! you wrote But I Love You, which was a gloriously beautiful (and heart wrenching) fic, i'm even more doubly excited now!
hmmmm, maybe i should have started with porn....

so_much_kimchi July 6 2009, 04:51:35 UTC

Wah, you're throwing compliments back at me! I'm blushing!

You've inspired me, now I want to write humour or at least something sweet... I'll try and get something done within the next few days ^^ A laugh a day keeps the doctor away... or is that apples? Or porn? A combo, I reckon =^_^=

veritas_vincit_ July 7 2009, 00:14:37 UTC

Yay! I'm stoked you're going to write something funny! I mean, your porn is amazing, so everything else must be awesome!!

i can't wait.

(i heard it was a porn a day...but that could just be me ><)