The People You Touch
The People You Touch
“Taki-sempai, can I please speak with you for a second?” Taki turned to face Hiyoshi, who was standing next to his locker. Taki raised a critical eyebrow but said nothing yet, rather waiting for Hiyoshi to speak. Inwardly Taki was smiling, he knew this was going to happen, he was more than ready to watch it fall into place. “You ( Read more... )
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second, do you have any idea how hard it is to concentrate on an OC-heavy, PoT RP when i'm reading stuff like this? >> XD
third, lovely piece of smut here. though the ending could have been drawn out a bit more, with a tad more description. (and there is no 'r' in 'prostate'. ;D) [oh, and is this hiyo's first time? sounds like it's not taki's, but if it's hiyo's... yo man, /nobody/ deep throats first time. XD ...it is horrible that i know this. iseriouslyamavirginthough.incaseyouwantedtoknow.ijusthavenolife.]
^_^
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Hehe, I'm glad and sorry at the same time.
Yeah, if didn't make much sense. It was supposed to be mindless porn. [It is not Hiyo's first time I'm pretty sure he had a fling with Kirihara before this. Taki's too gay for words, i think he visited quite a few gay bars. I love him anyway.] I wasn't sure what to do with the end though, so I kinda just went blahhh.
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Uhm, wow. That was delicious smut.
This is a pairing I'd never come up with myself, but somehow you've made it work :)
It's nice to see more of your writing here, I hope you post more soon ♥
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I remember reading it somewhere but not quite sure where, it was good though.
Thanks, my problem is dire need of a beta. The longer the stories I type, the worse the mistakes become.
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