Response to prompt: post

Mar 15, 2008 18:23

Title:  Turning, Turning We Come Out Right:  Part 2/3 
Author:  Majesta Moniet
Characters:  Mal, Inara
Rating:  PG
Word Count:  400
Disclaimer:  I do not own Firefly or profit from the use of its content.

Wasn’t much to look at.  Wasn’t much of anything, really.

But that’s the way he liked them:  broken in and ready to be made into something new.

Leaning ( Read more... )

mal, prompt: post, inara

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bookaddict43 March 16 2008, 10:17:12 UTC
I like the imagery of the ranch being old, broken and in need of fixing. It sort of juxtoposes with Mal'sfeelings for Serenity.

The exchange between Mal and Inara is very well done, they're still not understanding each other. I'm interested to see how you'll end it.

Also I liked your use of the prompt - cool:D

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