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firebunny

Fic: Intangible Loss

Mar 30, 2009 00:57

First off I want to apologize for not responding to everyone who commented on my last fic. I’m kind of embarrassed at how bitter and self pitying I got in my responses to the first few comments. I will get back to people, I promise. I really do appreciate the comments

Second, this is my last fic in response to Hex and then I’m moving on. I’ll ( Read more... )

chlark, birthday present, fanfic, smallville, fic: intangible loss, angst, clark, chloe

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firebunny March 30 2009, 05:38:28 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, because it really isn't what you asked for at all, but you posted after Hex about how you would like Chloe to tell Clark that he had messed up and walk away from him and for him to understand what he had lost.

I couldn't make her tell him that he'd messed up because I think it's in Chloe's nature to be completely understanding of Clark, but I think she would eventually reach a point when she'd go, "I can't always be there and get nothing in return."

Hopefully, Clark will wake up before Chloe reaches that point.

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firebunny March 30 2009, 05:46:13 UTC

The sad thing is I think Chloe expects to be taken for granted and doesn't see anything wrong in it.

For awhile I was a little miffed at Chloe because she wouldn't confide more in Clark. I thought if he knew how much she was suffering he would want to be there for her. But after seeing his reaction to her marriage falling apart it makes perfect sense to me that she wouldn't go to him when she's in pain. He wouldn't be any comfort at all.

angryscientist March 30 2009, 07:56:58 UTC

I hope Chloe takes charge again, I want her back at the DP again. Let Clark see what an idiot he is.

firebunny March 30 2009, 20:05:02 UTC

I think Chloe becoming Watchtower was supposed to be her taking charge of her life again. Sadly it included abandoning her dreams for no real reason except that someone had snatched them from her.

Clark, I just have no words for. I can't believe he treated Chloe has badly as he did. He's taken her for granted before, but he's never been that dishish about it. It makes me very sad.

shiverslala March 30 2009, 09:23:24 UTC

YAY! I don't know why but it made me happy - yeah ok I know why, he totally deserves that, it's logical and exactly what she should do, what any woman would surely do (but no, not in 'sv world of unicorns')

firebunny March 30 2009, 20:08:43 UTC

If SV was written by competant writers I think we could see consequences for the characters treating each other the way they do. It would be interesting and draw me into the show. But they are incompetant writers and there is no consequence for anything. *Sigh*

babydee1 March 30 2009, 12:54:44 UTC

Suffer, Clark. Suffer! Much as I hate Ollie at the moment, I hope she has loud, kinky sex with him on your desk. *End rant*

Thanks for this, Firebunny. I really want to see Chloe come to this realisation on the show, and for Clark to have to work at earning her affection all over again. He really doesn't deserve it after 'Hex'.

Great work!

firebunny March 30 2009, 20:49:17 UTC

I would love for Clark to just look at how he treats Chloe sometimes and modify his behavior on his own. He should see that kicking someone when they're down isn't really BFF behavior. And yeah, I'd like him to have to earn his way back into Chloe's affection. Then maybe he wouldn't take her for granted any longer.