"Coming home to Arthur" <- I read it and caught it before Francis did, it gave me cuddly warm feelings.
And oh my gosh those boys are too cute. I'm a little confused about their ages, but I think that'll come out as I read more. I'm looking more at sentence structure and vocabulary so I'm getting a sense of them being (a bit) older, but with Arthur dressing them and Francis helping them out of the car it seems more like they're in the 6-8 range. I don't know. It's hair-curlingly sweet either way.
Oh, poor Mattie! You really know how to writte him! Alfred is awesome, as always! :) I like how you are making both the adults fall in love with the kids xD
I hope that this is not too awkward- that approximately three years after you posted this, someone came here and read this amazing fan fiction of yours. I found the link here from a FrUK fan fiction on AO3 and I just had to check it out.
I'm so glad I did.
I'm not exactly good with words, but this story so far has been giving me chills and that warm, sleepy feelings. And I know this story is good, because I genuinely want every single character to be happy. I'm so thankful I came across this wonderful piece of art.
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Alfred and Matthew are just so adorable!!
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And oh my gosh those boys are too cute. I'm a little confused about their ages, but I think that'll come out as I read more. I'm looking more at sentence structure and vocabulary so I'm getting a sense of them being (a bit) older, but with Arthur dressing them and Francis helping them out of the car it seems more like they're in the 6-8 range. I don't know. It's hair-curlingly sweet either way.
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I like how you are making both the adults fall in love with the kids xD
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I'm so glad I did.
I'm not exactly good with words, but this story so far has been giving me chills and that warm, sleepy feelings. And I know this story is good, because I genuinely want every single character to be happy. I'm so thankful I came across this wonderful piece of art.
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