Comments | finnishsphinx: Fic: Target, Chapter 5 (Numb3rs, Charlie / Colby, Don)

finnishsphinx

Fic: Target, Chapter 5 (Numb3rs, Charlie / Colby, Don)

May 26, 2010 20:17

( Chapter 5 )

show: numb3rs, pair: charlie eppes / colby granger, pair: don eppes / martin fridegord, numb3rs / one-off

Comments 3

rambler75 May 26 2010, 20:47:15 UTC

Where IS Bobby! This is worse than a cliff hanger. I hope you are posting tomorrow bc I don't think I can even wait till the end of tonight!

Very nicely writen btw.

finnishsphinx May 26 2010, 21:01:08 UTC

Don`take this the wrong way, but I`m kinda glad to hear that:) because I was worried I left too many clues in this chapter. LOL (But if you look carefully they`re there...)

chymom May 27 2010, 00:58:15 UTC

Wow Colby way to scare Charlie. Is Charlie able to breath at all? Whats going on now? Is Don deaf for a short time due to the bomb or is it long trem. Or will he have an operation to restore it? Whats going on with there loved ones? Thanks for the update looking foward to more soon.