[Naruto] Diem Ex Dei [epilogue] -- Pein/Konan

Sep 14, 2008 14:04

Title: Diem Ex Dei [epilogue]
Genre: General, Tragedy, Romance (?)
Characters: Pein (Nagato), Yahiko, Konan, Madara (Pein/Konan)
Rating: PG-13 (T)
Warnings: Violence/tragedy. Um, maybe very very vague sexuality.
Summary: The rain has ended. It is time, at last, for her to remember.

First part is here.
Second part is here.

It is all so clear now. )

diem ex dei, naruto, fic, ch: konan, pein/konan, ch: pein

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postingwhore September 15 2008, 00:52:59 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Your ending was really well done; it wrapped the fic up very nicely and also delved into the psyches of our heroes. Nice Madara cameo as well. I really enjoyed reading this; it's a really good possibility for their backstory and their future (alas, why must I like villains :().

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hieronymousb September 15 2008, 01:00:03 UTC
Oh, yeah, I totally think Pein and Konan will have a tragic ending of some kind in canon. It's sad, but then, in some weird way, I think I like them because they do seem so tragic to me, so it wouldn't really seem right if their stories didn't end tragically. XD;

Madara is fun to write!

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croisee September 15 2008, 11:16:46 UTC
You know, I absolutely adore this. Your writing style, especially. To be honest, this is one of the few stories I've read that worked with this kind of writing style, and I'm so so glad you decided to share this because...

*sighs*

I'm at loss for words, you see? *_*

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hieronymousb September 15 2008, 22:02:17 UTC
Well, thank you very much! I'm quite a fan of experimental writing styles, but I agree that when they don't work, it can screw a piece up.

That is a gorgeous icon you have there, by the way.

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inugrlrayn September 15 2008, 18:26:49 UTC
I am totally in love with your way with words, but then you already know that. :) I really do think you tied this up quite nicely, and very eloquently. Tragic fluff is pretty impressive, by the way.

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hieronymousb September 15 2008, 22:06:40 UTC
It was fluff? Rly? XD;

I am such a sap when it comes to this pairing, which is weird, because they're, y'know, villains, but holy crap. O_o Every time I try to write this pairing, sapsapsapsapsapsapsap. And it's one of the only 'ships I'm that way with. >:O *usually moar of a genshipper/genficcer, wut*

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