A poem. Or something.

[finniebinnie]

Just a poem I wrote earlier for fun. I haven't truly come up with a title or anything for it yet (perhaps "Wrung From The Lungs of Thee"), for my brain is really sort of idle right now, and I still have quite a bit of editing to do on it, considering I've just wrriten it.

Far in my field of paper deep,
I graze of you by ink,
pithy rhymes-clasps of

Comments

[acciobatman]

'thick with the curling of syllables;'
I love that line.

[finniebinnie]

Thank you :)

[acciobatman]

your welcome. poetry seems so easy for you. you could probably make sentances do loop-the-loops.

[finniebinnie]

Hahaha. Well writing is my passion and all but I have seen some of your stuff and you really are quite the writer yourself.
Come on. You must admit it.

[marionette_vie]

I love how it has this old vibe to it.
You use old words like 'O and thy and I could go on, but you now :)
Amazing <33

[finniebinnie]

Thank you :) And yeah, I originally had two versions of it, the other version more "modern" than this, but this one felt much more right and more sincere to the initial idea (in my head) of what the poem would be. But thank you again! Haha.

[marionette_vie]

Ah, yeah, well it turned out so great :)
And you're welcome :)
I hope you're doing okay, IM me on AIM if you want to talk 8-)