Amplitude (Billie/Mike one-shot)

[finksgirl]

Fic Title: Amplitude
Fandom: Green Day
Author: finksgirl
Rating: R for language and sexual situation
Pairing: Billie/Mike, Billie/Adie and Adie/Jason W
Disclaimer: I sadly do not own Green Day. If I did they'd be touring constantly, have The Network and Foxboro Hot Tubs as their opening acts and the encore would be 2 hours of an orgy. *sighs*
Summary: I'

Comments

[rockstarsyndrom]

It's really cute (at the end). Kinda unexpected. And a bit hypocritical, but I mean, if I caught my wife cheating, I'd be pretty fucked up mentally too.

I think it's really awesome. I loved it. I could see an actual fic emerge from this if it really wanted to. Kinda like in Alien with the stomach thing.

Anyway, it rocked. Awesome job. Thumbs up.

-Lotus

[finksgirl]

hehe thanks Lo. *hug*
and you're ava made me giggle.

[dead_monologue]

This was beautiful, hun. Very sensual. I could totally understand what Billie was going through and how everything felt to him, how he stepped in and out of his own body and couldn't control anything around him, not what his wife did or what Mike did or what he did or thought... In short, it was awesome.

The only criticism I could give was that you made the radio thing a big part near the end, and it was great, but it might've been a little better if you could somehow bring it into the story closer to the beginning.

<3 Love you, wifey!

-Bobbye

[finksgirl]

thanks, love :arms:
Yeah, I went back and added some of the static and white noise references in at the beginning but I couldn't figure out if I could or where I could add more radio references in there.

[phantom_mcr]

I love it! I love the way you describe everything, it feels real, and very intense! Dammit, you people making me like the Billie/Mike pairing!

Oh, and I couldn't help noticing the huge "TORCHWOOD" and "JACK/IANTO" tags on the side of the screen. That made you double the win 8D

[finksgirl]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. =]
and :tehe: Torchwood is the best tv show ever. =D
My second hugest obsession. XD

[finksgirl]

Thanks, you've got most of what I was trying to get across.
And I was going to go into Jason and Adrienne more with it but I decided against it as that is the source of anger but it's not the main focus of the story. In my head Billie didn't stick around for an explanation, he just flipped so he didn't know what had happened either.

[finksgirl]

Ha really? Well I'm glad it helped you sort something out..

and right now I'm trying to finish another one-shot actually... I've got a few in the works. So I might become more active like I used to. As long as I beat back the damn writer's block.