Holding Onto the Things that Slip Through Your Fingers (21B-?)

[fingersfalling]

Hello everyone, I'm back. :} Thank you for your patience.

Chapter 21B in which there is a special appearance.

Previous chapters are HERE~

Thanks to mollybeakers and beagle_agent for their patience and their support.

Comments

Yay!

[anonymous]

You're back!! I was so unbelievably excited to wake up this morning and see the new chapter.

The trip sounded horrific; I don't blame Paul for wanting out though it makes me sad to see his relationships crumble (and at the same time glad? Because I loves me some angst).

Good luck on your AP tests! I'm sure you will do fine.

~Lute

Re: Yay!

[fingersfalling]

Glad to be back! :}

Angst galore! It's always nice to have a bit of that, even if it means suffering for the characters. Thanks for the luck, i think they went pretty well!

Fingersfallingupwards

[chutjedors]

LET ME KISS YOU 'COS YOU'RE BACK

I gotta tell you, you write the trips so well it feels like I'm going through them myself (not something I'd like to do but, well). I don't like the way John doesn't try to understand how hard it was for Paul, but on the other hand I understand him very well. Being in love and all... And John is quite self-centered, gotta admit. i love him anyway

Welcome back and good luck with your exams!

[aanahitt]

Oh my god, you're back!!!! *does a little dance*

I loved the chapter a lot, though I'm worried about the John/Paul thing. It was a bad idea for John to even push him to take it when he was so down, you can't trip when you're feeling bad, it's like a bad trip waiting to happen. :(

I'm just as excited as John is that he's not with Jane anymore, though.

[maccaforsale]

Ahh you're back! Can't tell you how excited I was when I saw your post! God there was so much tension throughout the whole chapter I swear it felt a little of the stress Paul was under. I'm surprised he didn't have another panic attack, but then again he had gotten it under control way back in chapter 11 or something. I don't know how those kinds of things work though. Focus on your exams though! We've waited and we can wait a bit more if it means you can concentrate on your finals :)

[anonymous]

Are you planning on continuing this wonderful story? Is it continued elsewhere b/c the link wasn't working? Please write more!! :)