Holding Onto the Things that Slip Through Your Fingers (10- 56)

[fingersfalling]

Phase ten, In which Paul gives a little help to his friend.
Love love LOVE to beagle_agent and mollybeakers for helping me even when I'm a disappointment to society. Starkey.

Past and present chapters HERE

Comments

[anonymous]

I love the fact that you focus on Paul's relationship with the George and Ringo as well as with John. I don't see many people talking about his and Ringo's friendship. But I am excited to see how Paul and John's relationship develops into something more.

[fingersfalling]

Very, very few chapters stand between a MAJOR turn in their relationship. :} (Good? Bad? What do you think . . .)

Thanks for the feedback! I'm trying to keep all the characters in the story!

[anonymous]

Lovely Ringo certainly would be the right person to send Paul home with, considering the events. Good thinking on Brian's part! Such a sweet moment between the two with the piano. I imagine it's difficult for Paul to interact with young Ringo and keep all of that separate from his knowledge of older Ringo. So much history and years between them...

Oooo Jane vs. John gets heated (with a side of George feeling left out). I guess Paul should feel somewhat flattered that all these people are fighting over him lol.

Great work as always!

-Lute

[fingersfalling]

Ringo is such a cute guy~ I've always wondered about his and Paul's relationship and what it must be like to be the only two left. . . . SAD.

:} He should be feeling the love!

Thanks for commenting~

loved it, as always

[aanahitt]

This chapter was cute, with their argument over Paul, and Paul trying to distract himself. He can't let it run on too long though, or he'll start worrying about what might go wrong if they don't have an album out in time, regardless of what's on there.
I bet Ringo thinks Paul's panic attack was because he finally cracked under the pressure of being a Beatle. I bet that'll be the common opinion.
And I think someone should remind him that if he does manage to reproduce everything perfectly, Brian and John die.

Re: loved it, as always

[fingersfalling]

Shh . . . Turn off your psychic powers. :} Seriously, do the stars tell you these things??

Yep, poor Paulie is gonna worry himself into the hospital AGAIN if he isn't careful. Ativan would have come in handy I think.

I'm sure they're all are watching him to see if he's going crazy from the pressure! It would make sense though . . .

Thanks, as always~

Re: loved it, as always

[aanahitt]

I guess the only explanation is that great minds think alike.

[mollybeakers]

Malarkey... that's how you remember it. Don't let yourself think HUTCH, because all will be lost. :)

Beautiful chapter. Paul playing with fire is FUN...

JB

[fingersfalling]

. . . It took me a solid minute or two to figure out what the heck you meant by Malarkey. Lol, I'll stay away from those thoughts.

You're golden dahling~

[maccaforsale]

Omg even your filler chapters are great! I wish I could just hug you to death for including Paul`s friendships with George and Ringo, but then the story would be left hanging haha
And Paul seriously needs like a month off on some private tropical island, because the tiniest things are setting him off :(
I`m interested on how you`re gonna do the album sessions and even more curious about what the final songs will be in this timeline, and if Paul will be able to cope with the changes.
And oooh Jane`s just full of sass! I love how she has the nerve to talk back to John.
And I wonder when you`re gonna drop the bomb and have Paul tell someone what`s really going on.
I`ll be waiting for the next chapter till then! :)

[fingersfalling]

Ha! I'm glad you like the filler chapters, cause I love writing them, especially with George and Ringo. They're such great people. You can strang- I mean hug me all you like after I finish. :}

Really though! A little pina colada could do him some serious good.

You might see a few things you've mentioned soon. . .

Fiery red-heads! I think she'd be a little tart. :}

Thanks for commenting~!