Oh, man, way to make me squee. The prospect of this chapter fills me with unrivalled joy (even Auron kind of gets shadowed out... but only a litte! *pats him*) Duuude, so happy to hear it's going swimmingly - AND YOU PROBABLY KNEW I'D SAY THIS, BUT CLEON! CLEON CLEON CLEON! Hell, I can't even remember Cloud being *in* it... is he, yet?? Am I being severely brain-damaged by not remembering him?? Okay, just saw the ETA... OH, MAN. IS THERE CLEON?!
*sigh* I guess if you REALLY wanna know...it's ok for me to tell you...
YES THERE TOTALLY IS! Tho how prominent it becomes is yet to be determined. And yeah, Cloud's totally in. Sora trains with him on Saturday morning, he was the assistant Blitz coach to Auron in the summer and everyone was sad when he wasn't the new JV coach. He's the coach for the swim team ^__^
And don't feel bad. So much happens in each of these chapters, I'm even having trouble keeping up. I just realized that last chapter I made Namine the older twin but somewhere near the beginning I had Roxas declare himself five minutes older...gotta go fix one of those. prolly the more recent one...*phail*
I remember now! Haha, as soon as I saw the words "trains with him on Saturday morning" it all came rushing back XD The prospect of Cleon in *any* capacity, whether they feature prominantly or not, is awesometastic. I can't wait. And I can't wait for more RiSo, more AkuRoku, more Meg, the return of the disappearing Travis, more Blitz, Clayton to have something really horrifically terrible happen to him, AURON, more of Riku's family, more EVERYTHING. *inhales* Yeah - totally looking forward to this next chapter :D
I lol over the time difference with Namine and Roxas - that is sooooooo easy to do X3 I run out of fingers and toes trying to recount the amount of times I make errors like that :P
Cloud/Leon? hmmm It would be interesting do you really want to? I wonder about Sora's reaction to that! haha though is Sora going to be doing more of those meetings with Cloud like Leon mentioned? he is kinda busy at the moment isn't he?
I'm really excited for the next chapter! I'm hyped for the word Reunion oh and Sephiroth and his 'small' people recording his son haha Yay! for Blitz!
Oh btw is Kairi dating Jim? It's random but I got curious
It's funny you should mention that. It gets poked at in this chapter. The answer has yet to be revealed...but I should know by the end. I'm thinking it's nothing official but they're hanging out a lot and leaning in that direction. Yah...
Lol Well I was just wondering cause Jim is amazing with his ability to create trouble and drag Sora along for the ride :P and Kairi is great and she deserves something good to happen to her!
I just read the word Rinoa down there... oh now I feel rather bad for her! but she's a fighter... she'd survive.
Hurrah for progress! For the size of these chapters, not to mention the amount that happens in them, I'm surprised you can get them out as quickly as you do. But anyway, on with the advice...
I may have to agree with the person above me and say that if it's really that minor, then you shouldn't worry about it. I can sort of seeing it exploding into something not-so-minor, and then you might have a lot of revamping to do. But, the choice is yours, young one. *is actually younger than you* Do what feels right to you. :)
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Okay, just saw the ETA... OH, MAN. IS THERE CLEON?!
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YES THERE TOTALLY IS! Tho how prominent it becomes is yet to be determined. And yeah, Cloud's totally in. Sora trains with him on Saturday morning, he was the assistant Blitz coach to Auron in the summer and everyone was sad when he wasn't the new JV coach. He's the coach for the swim team ^__^
And don't feel bad. So much happens in each of these chapters, I'm even having trouble keeping up. I just realized that last chapter I made Namine the older twin but somewhere near the beginning I had Roxas declare himself five minutes older...gotta go fix one of those. prolly the more recent one...*phail*
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I lol over the time difference with Namine and Roxas - that is sooooooo easy to do X3 I run out of fingers and toes trying to recount the amount of times I make errors like that :P
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I'm really excited for the next chapter! I'm hyped for the word Reunion oh and Sephiroth and his 'small' people recording his son haha Yay! for Blitz!
Oh btw is Kairi dating Jim? It's random but I got curious
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I just read the word Rinoa down there... oh now I feel rather bad for her! but she's a fighter... she'd survive.
*echos israel_project excitement*
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On the other hand, that could be why Rinoa and Leon broke up ZOMG!
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I may have to agree with the person above me and say that if it's really that minor, then you shouldn't worry about it. I can sort of seeing it exploding into something not-so-minor, and then you might have a lot of revamping to do. But, the choice is yours, young one. *is actually younger than you* Do what feels right to you. :)
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