Um hi! I followed your ff.net profile here, i hope you don't mind.
Just wanted to say that this story is a really interesting concept! Can't wait to see Riku :D
Everything so far makes sense to me, and the description of the keepers of time and space are adequate, i'm sure any further information needed regarding them will be explained as you progress further on in the story
YES! Inclusion of non-human Disney characters has made my day! ^_____^
It all made perfect sense to me.
The Keepers of Time and Space... To borrow an idea from Terry Prachett, they would be the ones who manipulate Time all over the place to make sure it stays in equal balance. In the bottom of the sea, where things change very little, they have little need for Time, so the KoTaSs will take the unneeded time from there and disperse it in the cities, where people always need MORE time. That make sense?
hmmm... an intriguing concept, but I'd rather not take ideas directly from another sources. After some thought, I've given them some control over death, usually in the record keeper sense, but occasionally not, and to some extent memory...and who knows what else. I'm sure necessary abilities will come with the story.
I'm glad you're reading and enjoying so far. I know that you know I appreciate your feedback, tons, but it never hurts to say so again. thanks for the feedback. It's SUPER appreciated ^__^
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Just wanted to say that this story is a really interesting concept! Can't wait to see Riku :D
Everything so far makes sense to me, and the description of the keepers of time and space are adequate, i'm sure any further information needed regarding them will be explained as you progress further on in the story
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It all made perfect sense to me.
The Keepers of Time and Space... To borrow an idea from Terry Prachett, they would be the ones who manipulate Time all over the place to make sure it stays in equal balance. In the bottom of the sea, where things change very little, they have little need for Time, so the KoTaSs will take the unneeded time from there and disperse it in the cities, where people always need MORE time. That make sense?
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I'm glad you're reading and enjoying so far. I know that you know I appreciate your feedback, tons, but it never hurts to say so again. thanks for the feedback. It's SUPER appreciated ^__^
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