FEELING ELECTRIC: Someone Who Cared

[find_rightbrain]

Title: Someone Who Cared
Feedback: Please, please, please?
Characters/Pairing: Natalie, Gabriel, Dan, mention of Diana
Word Count: 455
Rating: G
Summary: You learn self-sufficiency pretty quick in the Brown family.
Notes: Written for fe_challenges challenge #1.
Disclaimer: Not mine. All I have is a psych textbook and an impending exam that will kill my brain.

Comments

[storyinmypocket]

Oooh, I liked this a lot. ♥

Little!Natalie is too cute for words. And I ♥ your Gabriel.

[allfireburns]

*Giggles* Thank you! Little!Natalie is cute. And I'm glad you like my Gabriel. *Pets him* He's fun.

[panda_chibi]

aww this was adorable. And like many people seem to, I love little Natalie (though I love Natalie in general). She's so sweet, and innocent...and you can tell she hasn't been traumatized to the point of hating life yet, and its sweet...and sad because you realize what is to come (like when she realizes Gabe isn't real *tear and all the family trauma)

[allfireburns]

*Grins* Thank you. And yesh... how can anyone not love little!Natalie? She's just so huggable and sweet... and yeah, there's always the angst of knowing what's going to happen to her. *So addicted to angst*

[panda_chibi]

Who DOESN'T love angst? I mean, we all pretend to hate it, but seriously... ^_^

[allfireburns]

Heh. I don't even bother really pretending to hate it. Angst is love. Dark, painful, wibbly love.

[taramcfly]

"You want half of my Pop Tart? It's the only one left."

I find it so cute that she offered Gabe half her Pop Tart. Soooooo cute!

[allfireburns]

Yesh. *Giggles* But Natalie's just plain cute anyway when she's little.

[cameraneverlies]

I swear Little!Nat is adorable! You write both of these two just beautifully.