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DOLLHOUSE: (Imaginary) People

Dec 07, 2009 15:38

Title: (Imaginary) People
Characters/Pairing: Claire and Topher
Word Count: 583
Rating: PG
Summary: It might be simpler, Claire thinks, if she were one of the people who never has doubts.
Notes: Written for

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character: dollhouse: topher brink, fandom: dollhouse, character: dollhouse: claire saunders, for: comm: sunday_reveries

Comments 4

eiregirl05 December 10 2009, 03:22:38 UTC

'She watches him bound up the stairs, two at a time, obviously already moving on to whatever fascinating, theoretically bloodless puzzle he has in front of him now, and she thinks she hates him. She can't bear to think that it might be just because hatred is easier than jealousy.'

Nice touch. It's like a wonderful twist ending to a movie. I've never considered that she might be jealous. Very well done.

allfireburns December 10 2009, 12:22:53 UTC

Thank you. I imagine it might be easy to be jealous of Topher - he enjoys what he does without (as far as Claire can tell) any moral quandaries about it. That's more than anyone else in the Dollhouse can say.

streussal December 10 2009, 21:06:09 UTC

Ooooh, Claire. Nice insight.

Also, I could totally hear Topher's voice in my head. Great job!

allfireburns December 11 2009, 21:34:00 UTC

Thank you! (And Topher is so much fun to write. I'm glad it came out sounding like him. ^^)