TORCHWOOD: With Blood and With Time

May 12, 2008 14:52

Title: With Blood and With Time
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Gwen, mention of Jack/Rose, Jack/Ianto, and Gwen/Rhys
Word Count: 1109
Rating: PG
Summary: One of these days, he's going to be okay with her walking away...
Notes: Spoilers for all of season two. First two parts written for writing_game ages ago.
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of its characters ( Read more... )

verse: dw: tumbling after, character: dw: jack harkness, character: dw: gwen cooper, pairing: dw: jack/rose, pairing: dw: jack/gwen, pairing: dw: gwen/rhys, for: comm: writing_game, fandom: doctor who/torchwood

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kawaiispinel May 12 2008, 19:18:09 UTC
*wibbles* Oh Jack. God, that was breaky and pretty and just... Guh. I loved the comparison to Rose early on and then that second to last paragraph just hit me for some odd reason, and... Just... Yeah. One day I will actually be able to form a review that isn't babbly and incoherent and random. Your writing makes me fail at words? Yes. Let's go with that.

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allfireburns May 12 2008, 19:20:31 UTC
Evie and I have been flailing over that scene with Jack watching Gwen and Rhys walk away since it aired, because it is so much like the scene with Rose and Mickey in "Boomtown". And... ow.

I don't mind babbly incoherent reviews! They make me just as happy. *Grins* And hey, it could be a lot worse than making you fail at words. ^^

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lightz474 May 13 2008, 02:01:39 UTC
That was really good. I loved the ending where she's sitting in his lap and it reminds him of Rose. I mostly love how he's trying to keep himself from feeling things for her but in the end you really show how much he cares for her. Great work on this! ♥

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allfireburns May 13 2008, 02:07:38 UTC
Thank you! I've always maintained that the reason Jack took a shine to Gwen early on was that she reminded him of Rose. And then, of course, he got to know and love her on her own merits, but, you know, it's still there. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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