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Babel 5/?

Jun 28, 2011 18:12

Babel 5
hospital again, talking, talking, talking, Dr. Choi Dongwook
TOP/CL, AU, NC-17

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r: pg-13, f: top, p: top/cl, t: babel, f: cl

Comments 7

marked_for_life June 29 2011, 15:17:20 UTC

oww, this made my heart hurt. you've done such a good job with both seunghyun and chaerin and how they're both right and both wrong.

also, this line - His knotted eyebrows and down-turned lips are like lines in a haiku that speak of fear and faraway hope - is so pretty.

filmfire July 1 2011, 11:26:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm assuming you're talking about the squabble in the hospital? Mannnn I hope I do their issues justice he heheh.

gypseydzhipsi June 29 2011, 21:09:37 UTC

Holy crap. Silent reader alert! This is amazingly written. My personal story is similar to that of Chaerin in this fic. The only major difference is the hospitalization and love from another person. You've got me crying, and I love it. It makes me feel better. Lovely writing! Poor Seunghyun! Poor Chaerin. Poor Dr. Choi. I just want to hug them all. Aish. I can't wait to see what you write next.

filmfire July 1 2011, 11:28:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm sorry to hear about that, but I'm glad it made you feel better, if only slightly. Be happy! ♥

xx9aznfaith9xx June 30 2011, 22:41:57 UTC

wow. its crazy how much i get into the story when i read it (translation: you're doing an awesome job and ur writing is tha bomb). I felt my heart tightening multiples times and then bam. a tear streamed down my face. seunghyun has so much for love for chaerin, which is what she will need but its too much..its blinding him doing what's best for the both of them.

this is simply amazing, cant wait for the next part! yea it sucks to wait for updates, but yours are always wprth i!

filmfire July 1 2011, 11:30:58 UTC

Oh mannnnnnnnnnnnnn /issues tissues/ that is such a compliment, thank you so much! 8D

I procrastinated a hell lot on this chapter, I admit hehehehe

tammi_poo July 4 2011, 16:44:40 UTC

ouch. this chappie made my heart hurt so much for seung hyun. like really, its been absolutely crazy. fate has really delt the both of them hard blows, but the aftermath of it all...poor seung hyun. he;s just about lost it completely as well. his entire life seems to be crumbling around him and he is helpless against it all.

im wondering what type of insight chae rin has to her condition-its a bit conflicting. but mentally she's definitely all over the place, she couldn't tell she was having sex with seung hyun?!!