The Letter

Jun 18, 2012 00:17


The Letter

Title: The Letter
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Word count: 1.365
Rating: R
Warning: Agony, character death
Summary: Jonghyun receives an unexpected letter
a/n: This is my first attempt to write fanfiction. So please be understanding. I want to thank kinkitup for encouraging me and correcting my mistakes. If not for her I don't think I would have ( Read more... )

fanfiction, oneshot, jongkey

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kinkitup June 18 2012, 00:20:45 UTC
He woke up to a beautiful morning with the sun shinning brightly and the birds singing happily. But Jonghyun didn’t see any of it. He felt tired, his eyes sensitive and swollen. He was angry because he had broken the promise he had made to himself. He cried last night. He cried again.

I think these are my favorite lines. You manage to drag out a feeling and keep it intact without allowing the reader to lose interest. It is a beautiful fic. You killed my favorite character but it was very well written and it made my heart cry.

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fillina93 June 18 2012, 01:01:11 UTC
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.
Omo, sorry for killing your favorite character...

*hugs* Also, thank you once again for helping me through all of this

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eteoklis June 19 2012, 04:05:57 UTC
It was great, the ending was kind of unneccessary (though saved by the "hint of life" line) but still, great. Keep it up.

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fillina93 June 19 2012, 04:17:53 UTC
Thank you for reading it :) lobe u sweetie bear <3

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UTC eteoklis April 16 2013, 01:40:52 UTC
love you too cute tiger :) <3

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sofia_kat_tun June 19 2012, 10:36:51 UTC
Giati mou to kaneis auto??
afou 3ereis poso eukola sugkinoumai! epithdes to 'kanes etci? pali klaiw koubades oloklhrous xazh! :(
wraio htan alla.. snif

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fillina93 June 19 2012, 10:48:32 UTC
Axou to, sugkinh8hke kale. *skoupizei t dakrua s k s hremei*
Xairomai p s arese pantws ^^

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sofia_kat_tun June 19 2012, 10:50:12 UTC
pare kai to xartomanthlo me tis mu3es mou :P

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fillina93 June 19 2012, 10:52:53 UTC
xaxa 8a 8eles.Auto krata t :P

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sofia_kat_tun September 24 2012, 17:37:44 UTC
seriously now..... I had forgotten all about this and now I'm sitting here -while the store is still open- and I'm crying my heart out cause I made the mistake of reading it again :(

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