Fiction: Series - Sparks

[fillesanyonnon]

title: Sparks; But I’ve Come Through
word count: 811
rating: PG-13
warning(s): language, drinking
character(s): Fernando Torres, Sergio Ramos, Ruben de la Red
author’s note: This has been a work in progress for three months, mainly because every time I begin to write this, it becomes lost or deleted. So, finally, it’s getting started! Consider this, I

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[lady_quark]

“Smile, Fernando, you won the Euro.” He looked up to see Rubén grinning kindly at him.
I'm coming to the main part of the story in a sec, but please know that this really watered my eyes.
Because this is everything I'm ever wishing for and it's just so normal so right so perfectly that it's Rubén who's there and talks to Nando, so casually. I don't read that often. ... And I love you for putting the accent on his 'e'. ;______;

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Anyway. (<- see, I've de-capslocked my keyboard again ^^)
This was a lovely chapter! I liked how everyone was like 'oh, look at the kid' before and then Nando scored the goal ... very nice recap of a truly fantastic night. :D
Also, I love how much details you involved, like the dance around Schweinsteiger (had me in stitches for months)... that made it something really special.
And of course I like the idea of linking each chapter with a song - that sounds like a very good idea.

I'm more than just curious what else you will come up with ... :D
(also, I love your icon. You has new shiny, no?)

[fillesanyonnon]

I actually think that part is my favorite out of this little thing. And I don't know about watery eyes but I am so very pleased you like it; you're the Rubén (oh ho ho, accent!) certifier.

That night was fantastic, wasn't it? Although, at the time, I was a German fan, torn to pieces.

Teehee, laudatory-punkin-seed here! Thank you much, you're kind. ;)

(New icon I made, of the gypsy!)

[lady_quark]

Rubén certifier, I like that! :)
{off topic, but this reminds me of: I'm doing a 'Honourable mentions' section in my profile and I'd like to link you there as well ... you mind becoming the Gonzalo to my Ezequiel?}

(and new shiny gypsy icon is ... new & shiny. :) Me likes.)

[fillesanyonnon]

Hmm, and now I need to change that Post-It to say 'Rubén Certifier'. :D

(Pssh, I don't mind at all!)