Einmal mehr: "Geist"

[filkerdave]

With the help of several frends, I've refined this one. Be nice, it's my first song in German!

GEIST
Text und Musik Dave Weingart © 2005
(mit Hilfe von madfilkentist, ina und Torsten (WINOLJ))
(zusätzlich Hilfe von #filkhaven -- Sie wissen, wem Sie sind)Ich bin der Leeremann

Comments

[delennara]

Eerie. *shudders*

[filkerdave]

Oh, good..that's what it's supposed to be!

[kyttn]

I like the gist of it, though it doesn't read easily in German to me, at least not all the way through. Since I don't know the original song, though, I'll withold comments and wait to see what true German speakers think :)

[filkerdave]

This *is* the original song ;)

[kyttn]

Oops! When I read your post originally, I managed to decide this was to the tune of the Aretha Franklin song you were listening to, which I don't actually know.

[chirosinger]

I still say it's sad. :-( Good, bu t sad. Can't wait to hear it!

[andpuff]

Very eerie. I really like the bracketting repetitions.