fic: Wotan's Day 12/16

[filenotch]

Title: Wotan's Day
Fandoms: Highlander, X-files, Invisible Man
Rating:NC-17 overall, PG-13 this chapter.
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em.
Background:The year is 2023. Methos, the oldest of the Immortals in Highlander, was living as a corporate lawyer in Denver. Alexander Krycek, the double-dealing ratboy of the X-Files, was living there as an art

Comments

[rosewildeirish]

Ouch. Poor Methos, and I'm feeling for MacLeod too. Still, that's an awfully quick time for the honeymoon to be over.

Few minor errors:

MacLeod asked for you before he recovered himself from the clones, but he passed it of as Mathias. I don't think anyone else noticed."

Of should be off.

"Sorry, he said.

“Ah, but I feel naked without it. You wouldn’t want me to be uncomfortable, would you, lover?

"Bierce suggested we not join them. When we talked, Kaos' compound had just been destroyed by a truck bomb.

All missing a quotation mark at the end.

"That's what we think, too, "Johnson said, glancing at MacLeod. Space on wrong side of quotation mark.

Heh. Again, can't help it.

[filenotch]

Well, they had seven years before they got married. How many long-term couples have I seen that break up after they make it legal?

And again, thanks. I'm going to have to snark at my RL beta.

[rosewildeirish]

Mea culpa, mea culpa, mea maxima culpa.

My only excuse is that the story was so damn engaging that I had to keep reminding myself that I needed to edit. So really, it's your fault.

Except it's not. And now I feel all guilty. Happy holidays to you too.

[filenotch]

Sorry, I've been infected with a current client. "When in doubt, deflect all blame."

The right answer is: "It's amazing she caught as much as she did, given the 60K+ of words I dumped in her lap. All errors, mine."