Comments | filenotch: drabble, SGA

filenotch

drabble, SGA

Sep 19, 2006 11:47

SGA drabble written for monanotlisaHe hears someone say, "Stop it!" but he can't ( Read more... )

drabble, sga, fic

Comments 7

britta54 September 20 2006, 02:59:13 UTC

'you' should be 'your' before 'hands'

Right?

filenotch September 20 2006, 03:17:02 UTC

Yep, thanks, will fix.

britta54 September 21 2006, 23:32:48 UTC

You know, I like this.

Even if I have no idea who these guys are, I still like it.

$:-)

filenotch September 22 2006, 01:25:05 UTC

Girl, you need to get hooked on SGA.

britta54 September 22 2006, 01:37:34 UTC

It would be difficult since I quit watching TV several years ago. I do have one, but it's B/W with a 4" screen, runs on batteries, and is currently living beneath a hat (to keep the dust off).

alizarin_nyc September 22 2006, 05:36:52 UTC

Lucky Mona!

This is great. I wonder if it occurs (or could occur) after Phantoms when everyone's brain is messed up -- but then again, no, because Rodney is wounded.

I like "his heartbeat shakes his chest." Nice.

filenotch September 22 2006, 12:29:37 UTC

I'm not sure where it's set. Mona wanted drabble, and that's what came out. It didn't take much to get it to 100 words on the nose.

Glad you liked it.