DGM: "Uniform Discipline"

Jul 16, 2010 01:32

The new uniforms had brought about a very few positive effects, in Kanda's book, but mostly they had prompted one very, very big negative -- they had made him look at Lenalee.
Written for springkink, to the prompt Kanda/Lenalee: obsession/denial; "She intrigues him, which he finds disturbing." Mild sensuality, unless you're Komui, in which case mind-blowing ( Read more... )

!d. gray-man, !!springkink, lenalee, kanda, :kanda/lenalee

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hinodeh July 16 2010, 07:44:28 UTC
Your Kanada characterization is awesome! He feels just like the canon one. And it's always amusing to see a guy like him struggle with his hormones.

I also loved that line about Lenalee's smile taking on a strange quality. Even when she's being threatening she can smile sweetly at you. XD

You also led up nicely to that kiss in the end. It was really cute.

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unedited July 16 2010, 08:35:38 UTC
Thank you! I used to feel like I didn't get Kanda at all, but libekory RPs an excellent Kanda and I feel like I know him better after watching her play him. X3 So I give some of the credit to her, but I'm really happy you thought I was doing it right!

Lenalee is hardcore. Kanda knows better than to argue with her, amirite?

Thanks againnn~

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hashire July 16 2010, 08:05:09 UTC
Is it incredibly sad that I've been looking forward to this ever since I saw that you claimed it?...uh.

♥. Just ♥.

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unedited July 16 2010, 08:38:54 UTC
No it is awesome sfjlkgh

eee I'm glad you liked!! And I hope it helped a little with a sucky week. :D

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hashire July 16 2010, 16:24:15 UTC
askdfka okay good. ;_;

How could I not? And it did. :D More ♥.

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hakasha July 16 2010, 10:51:29 UTC
ohoho<3 Oh, Kanda.

His characterization was awesome, and his inner struggle was... kind of amusing, poor guy. XD

And I can't help but imagine Kanda's reaction to that guy from Central that was oggling Lenalee in that one chapter... XDD

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i_am_zan July 16 2010, 14:00:47 UTC
This made me smile. Thank you for sharing.

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fenikkusuken July 16 2010, 16:41:15 UTC
Beautifully done! Kanda was so... Kanda that I grinned all the way through the fic!

Mugen will be kept extra-sharp, I think. *wink*

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