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CG: "A Clever Disguise/Breakfast"

Nov 28, 2009 18:45

More than her planning, more than her war, Leloucia cherishes her family and the few friends she can truly lean on. She's never been able to let go of the past. Not easily. Not like C.C.
This was written with 10_switched in mind. That means genderswap. You've been warned!

.a clever disguise: breakfast.
( That damn white Knightmare had been agitating her so much she'd begun to get careless. Tearing out of the clubhouse in the morning before even having breakfast... What had she been thinking? )

!!10_switched, c.c., milly, !code geass, nunnally, lelouch

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churched November 29 2009, 01:56:16 UTC

Poor Leloucia! I guess all the isolation Lulu Prime goes through is compounded by Leloucia pretending to be a boy. You skate the line of C.C.'s barbs very well -- I always felt that half of it was trying to toughen Lulu up, half of it was out of plain malice. In that respect, you write her wonderfully.

cryingcat613 November 29 2009, 05:04:15 UTC

Ooh, very nice. You've really captured Lelouch's canon personality and added to it Leloucia's burden of keeping her female identity secret. Love it!

robotlove December 1 2009, 09:12:53 UTC

Very nicely captures the feel of Geass. I shall be waiting for more! :9