DGM, "Phoenix Generous"

Dec 22, 2008 17:21

Christmas is a trying time for Allen, but Lavi doesn't plan to give Allen anything ordinary. He has to give Allen something thoughtful. Something unique. Something -- irreplaceable.

Warnings: Slightly saladfic'd. Lavi is stubborn and also creative. Completely unfounded extrapolations of canon. Part of the Phoenix chronology, but not directly ( Read more... )

allen, !d. gray-man, !d. gray-man: phoenix, lavi, :lavi/allen

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p_sky December 23 2008, 06:26:12 UTC
Hee! That was just so sweet. I loved all of it, from Lenalee not letting Allen get gifts to Lavi finding Allen's family. It's all so believable and well written!

You get yourself a special Xmas cookie =3

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platinumpair December 23 2008, 12:03:27 UTC
I'm addicted to your Phoenix Chronology now. The entire concept was amazing and your ending made my day.

"Do you like it?" Lavi asked when he just stared at it numbly. "For Christmas, I got you -- Christmas."

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yamiyoru December 23 2008, 13:18:32 UTC
that is so sweet, i love the last sentence that christmas is a gift.

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naru_kyou December 23 2008, 23:18:36 UTC
Oh this was great! You made everything very believable to have actually happened in the DGM storyline, right down to Allen's mother's name :]
Loved this, and love the chronology. Hope to see much more <33

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monelisa December 26 2008, 23:19:49 UTC
awwwwnn, what a lovely idea -^^- Personally, I always thought December 2nd or 4th is more appealing to Allen but it's an interesting idea, nonetheless. It was super realistic; it really made a lot of sense >w< The ending was so cute!

I wish I could shut up about this but I want to review about something: It took me a while to realize that the 'them' in "Man, they still aren't letting you get them Christmas presents?" is an emphasized term and not a southern accent by Lavi ^^;; I had to reread that part too a few times to understand that Allen's gifts were being rejected (btw, I loled at Kanda's reaction xDDD)

trust Allen to desire giving presents -^^- this is going to my memories, oh yes..

Merry (late) Christmas!! ^^

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