DGM, "Smoldering"

Nov 25, 2008 15:14

Returning to the Black Order HQ after years of letting everyone thinks he was dead, Lavi finds that his existing memories don't quite do everyone justice -- and in the case of one, memories just aren't enough at all.Warnings: Saladfic. Lavi skips merrily from person to person. Crowley crying like a hormonal teenage girl. Lenalee's silent wrath. ( Read more... )

!!20_heartbeats, allen, !d. gray-man, !d. gray-man: phoenix, lavi, :lavi/allen

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apapazukamori November 26 2008, 00:49:14 UTC
I love this universe/storyline you're working with. :) It's plausible and the characters' reactions are totally believable. I liked the scene with Marie and Miranda the most, I think. And of course, the moment with Allen is very sweet. It seems like the only time Lavi's really relaxed.

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sakanagi November 26 2008, 01:24:07 UTC
I think the interaction with Kanda and the mentions of Lenalee were the best part of this fanfic - all of those reactions were completely believable. The section with Crowley was really cute, and I think the idea of Miranda learning the harp was great. And Lavi having sent the anonymous watch - yes, well so much for Lavi being detatched. XD

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p_sky November 26 2008, 01:25:06 UTC
*___* Oh, it's so good.

I love the way Lavi meets them all again, and the little inserts like Crowley bawling his eyes out, Lenalee refusing to talk with him, and was that a Marie/Miranda scene???? *is shot*

The end though, with Lavi unwinding with Allen, was probably my favorite part ^^

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elict November 26 2008, 05:51:18 UTC
I really, really, really love this story. It's one of the best "when it's all over" stories I've read. The part with Marie and Miranda made me particularly happy, because there can never be enough Marie/Miranda in the world ♥ And Kanda being so very Kanda-like was almost relieving in the middle of it all ^^

I would love to know what is up with Lenalee, though. Hopefully there'll be more parts in the future?

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