DGM, "Phoenix"

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On a seemingly innocent errand for Komui, Allen encounters a man who's been dead for four years. And Lavi is surprised to see him, too.

Warnings: Dead men walking without any eyepatches at all. Inappropriate brandy consumption. Incredible dorkiness. Allen forgiving everyoneCurrently gen, for the Lavi/Allen prompt 'Year [faces that stay with you

Comments

[sakanagi]

That's really well written. I love the way Allen was bothered by Lavi leaving but forgave him for it, and the way that Lavi was curious about the scrolls, and neutral to some extent, but not cruel. It seemed as if Lavi felt a bit guilty about the things he'd done and really was still 'Lavi'. Very nice!

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That's exactly what I wanted to convey. :3 The sequence in the Ark went out of its way to say that all 49 "names" have essentially been the same person at their core, so I do believe that the things Lavi's feeling now, the human emotions, are real things that won't go away very easily. Even years later. (Maybe especially years later?)

Thanks for comment. ♥

[magical_poof]

I like this, it's pretty good so far! I like the interactions between Allen and Lavi, especially how Allen tries to subtly entice Lavi XDD I hope to see more soon!

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Allen's not as smart as Lavi and it sort of makes tricking him hard. XD But it's fun anyway. I'll be sure to post if I get more out there~

[dhampir_72]

What a phenomenally written piece of work! This has captured my interest! Please continue!

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There will be more, if I can help it! I'm really glad you liked it and hope you continue to like it when I get more out. :D

[kara_angitia]

I really liked this. I hope you plan to continue it ^_^

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I definitely do! I'm glad you liked and thank you for commenting ♥

[dollypie]

ohhh very interesting! I can't wait to read more. :)) I liked the thoughts Allen was making in his head. <3

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Allen's head is a fun place to be, I think. X3 I'm glad you enjoyed and I hope to get the next piece out soon~