Comments | figment_tree: TOA, "Keeping Secrets"

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TOA, "Keeping Secrets"

Mar 24, 2008 19:47

Warnings: Small, scary children. Pastfic detailing The Meeting Of the last of the Keterburg kids. Makes extensive use of extra-canon materials (Tales of Fandom, novels) to frame the fanfic; Jade's conviction to and method of meeting the prince are canon to both, and Peony's actions towards the end are canon to the novels. Contains some Jade being ( Read more... )

jade, !tales of the abyss, peony, ::gen

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yhibiki March 25 2008, 10:02:31 UTC

Oh, I really liked this. :) I think you caught Jade's character really well.

Just a note though, I think it should be "capital," not "capitol." ^^;; The capitol is where the government meets in our nation's capital. (... Which sounds weird, reading it now, but I live in the DC area and the WB used to call it that all the time. "Our nation's capital!")

unedited March 25 2008, 15:16:32 UTC

Jade's POV is fun. XD Evil, but fun.

Also, that's excellent, it's been driving me crazy and I never know if I'm going to type one or the other. XD The capitol is a building, the capital is a city. MAKES NO SENSE BUT I GOT IT. *fixes*

ang3l_sh1 March 25 2008, 10:12:45 UTC

Oh this make me so happy and squee inside. I've been mourning the lack of ToA fandom. But this, especially the fact that it's the Keterburg kids makes it even better. I could see this happening and all three of them are so in character. Sorry I'm so incoherent at the moment, I just can't express how much this little fic makes me so happy. I really hope you write more ToA fics in the future.

unedited March 25 2008, 15:19:43 UTC

I'm going to wind up writing fgldkjgd at least three more? about the four from Keterburg, if all goes according to plan, so don't worry. X3 I love TOA but they're my favorite, no question. I'm so glad you liked~ ♥

maladaptive March 25 2008, 14:20:45 UTC

omg YAAAAAAY. Nothing intelligent to add besides YAAAAAY you write them so well, and poor Saphir, you just want to pat him or give him a cookie or something.

unedited March 25 2008, 15:22:34 UTC

He gets nothing but grief, I don't know why he hangs around with dicks like Jade and Peony. XD Mostly Jade. THANKS ♥

bolshevists March 26 2008, 01:42:19 UTC

That was cute! I always enjoy reading this type of fic.

One little nit-picky detail, though. One would preform a necropsy on an animal. Autopsy is a word reserved for humans only (the prefix "auto" meaning self). The English language is a silly thing.

unedited March 27 2008, 15:08:29 UTC

Thank you~ I'm glad you liked it. :3

I'm seeing it both ways, so for anyone else I might let it slide -- but technically you're right and the correct term is necropsy, and Jade would certainly be technical about it. XD So I have fixed it. ♥ Thanks for the tip!

cephy March 26 2008, 02:17:05 UTC

Oh, this is fabulous. :D You've got the voices down pat, it's just so very them.

unedited March 27 2008, 15:10:41 UTC

♥ Thanks so much! I love these two to death, and I RP Peony (so you'd think I'd actually write something from his POV?) so I'm especially glad you think that the tone is right for them~