One more day in Paradise - part two

[fighter_of_moon]

It was raining.

A sad laugh echoed through the rain; it was quickly turned into a muffled sob of pain. Koki let himself fall down at the corner of Kazuya’s complex, feeling like weeping along with the rain.

Pathetic.

That would be the perfect word to describe him right now. He never thought he could live something like this or that he’d feel

Comments

[fazlyn_n]

Saving my SPOT~~~~

It will be happy ending right??? right??? right???

Can I bribe you with Kokame private pic just so you'll make it a happy ending?

Ohhh...I'll just wait for the 3rd part ne~~~

[fighter_of_moon]

Kokame private pic *o*
I'm bribed! <3 yes, it will be a happy ending

thank you for bribing me reading *hugs* (I'll wait for the pic ;;) lol)

[fazlyn_n]

!st the Private pic I owe you...

[fazlyn_n]

Now back to the comment...

I OFFICIALLY HATE JIN in this fic...
OMG, how much trouble does one ex-bf can cause...

But I'm happy knowing Kazu really does love Koki and will not allow his past to ruin his present...

My heart clench so much when Koki refused to listen and accept Kazu...and the way Kazu so badly hurt when Koki remind him of Jin who left...Want to hug him and maybe give a big hard smack on Koki to return him back to reality...

I better go to next part...

[mrs_koki]

I want a happy KoKame ending as well....Please...I beg you, mind you begging is something I don't normally do as my pride gets in the way. But I'll throw my pride out of the window if you make this a happy ending for KoKame. *on knees begging with big irresitably, yet very adorable puppy eyes. I'll even give you Kokame private pic as well.

[fighter_of_moon]

2nd Kokame private pic *o* I'm getting excited *kyaaa* lol at me
*stares at puppy eyes* can't resist! Kokame private pic and puppy eyes are killing me >///< so....yes! happy ending is!

thanks for reading and adding me as your friend *hugs*

PS: I'll soon read your Kokame's *muhaha* just to let this year pass as there are lots of things left to be done xD

[mrs_koki]

Yay!! *tackle hugs*

I know have a quite a few KoKame pics that I haven't posted and I even have one of Kame pretending to go down on Koki, that I don't remember if I posted it or not. I'll take a look through my library and see what I have.

[kazu_chan_love]

:3 *sniff* why did Jin said that, yes it was the truth but he forced kazuya to do it!

somehow i feel sad for jin as well
because he loves kazuya too but koki was the one who was there for kazuya when jin was gone. and koki is the one that kazuya loves now...^^

koki trust kazu :3

kokame happy ending! onegai:3 *puppy eyes*

[fighter_of_moon]

I feel sad for Jin too because he didn't realize what he had and now he wants it back... this kind of love is hurtful and I kind of imagined Jin feeling it. He has lost his chance...

But now Koki's trust is the problem >//< the baka him doesn't know who or what to believe anymore ...*sigh*

and yes! happy ending is ~ :D (another puppy eyes....I can't resist >///< )

*huggles*

[kazuyachan]

Lol evil Jin
come here and let ne keel him with a folk
oh wait folk can't keel darn it!
Let me kick him to death instead
gomen ne I like Jin
but I love jazu Moore

[fighter_of_moon]

:)) evil, but hurt Jin XD

no, don;t kick him to death *puppy eyes* we still need him >////< can't believe I said that o.o
I love Kazu more too <3 he's my ichiban <3

thanks for reading *hugs*

[chibi_turtle]

uwaaah third part please~!! >.<
gave kokame a happy end ;_;

[fighter_of_moon]

they'll have a happy ending :D they deserve it and god knows i want them to be together too >///< my poor lil' babies have suffered enough because of me xD

I'll post the 3rd part immediately as I finish it writing ^^

thank you for reading *huggies*