Fifthmus Fic: Memoirs of the Honninbou (for harumi, from invitan)

[mmmdraco]

TITLE: Memoirs of the Honninbou
AUTHOR: invitan
RECIPIENT: harumi, requestsCHARACTER: Kuwabara

Comments

[issen4]

Hee. I love the your senile like a fox Kuwabara!

[ontogenesis]

Hahha, Kuwabara really is a twisted old pervert. I can hear him cackling now... run away, Ogata!

[lacygrey]

'Like hell he’s going to admit that he has forgotten the first half of his life. He beams, impressing her with his fourteen remaining teeth; and she has another suspicion that he just wants her to believe that he has existed for eternity, which is probably very close to the truth.'

This is somehow funny, grotesque and profound at the same time.

I find parts of this fic very amusingly understated in the voice you use. Some parts I don't quite follow though and, while I think a lot of that's down to my cultural ignorance (I'm European), you also make some unusual word choices. If you'd be interested in discussing this please send me a LJ message - I'd love to be able to 'get' the rest of the jokes in this fic.

Well done in any case for braving Kubawara!

[invitan]

Thank you ^__^ I already PM you.

[lacygrey]

Hi, I find I can't PM you back, some sort of hitch with privacy settings.