Paaaiiiin and a fic

Jul 07, 2008 20:02

Last night I managed to wrench my back pretty badly, resulting in extreme pain and a sleepless night. This morning, I could barely move or stand up straight, let alone drive or sit in a straight-backed chair for six hours, so I called in sick to the museum and spent all day languishing in bed. On the plus side, it gave me the time to finish this ( Read more... )

fics, daniel/charlotte, my back really hurts, fanfiction, lost

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franza July 13 2009, 18:08:50 UTC
Wow, seriously brilliant. I loved so many things about this story, especially the Child Charlotte perspective and their boat times. Cor it was great and as a brit i can assure you that your fear about "too many americanisms" was unfounded, you got it spot on :D.
P.S: i thought exactly the same thing about the "timetravelers wife", looking forward to seeing that

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fifmeister July 14 2009, 04:01:44 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it. And I'm very glad to hear it meets with a Brit's approval. ;)

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valhalla37 July 13 2009, 20:37:25 UTC
Wow -- this is really, really fantastic. The description of their initial meeting is so touching and evocative, and I love the cyclical concept that brings the end right back to the beginning. And the interactions on the boat -- so completely in-character, and a really great Charlotte perspective. I can't even believe this is your first attempt at Dan/Charlotte; great work!

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fifmeister July 14 2009, 04:11:28 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it--especially the characterization, since it's always a little nervewracking writing a character for the first time. And I was particularly fond of both Charlotte and Daniel practically from day one, so I wanted to be sure I did them justice. Thanks again; your comment totally made my night! :D

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