Fic: Letters From a Serial Killer, part three

[fifmeister]

Title: Letters From a Serial Killer (3/3)
Fandom: Heroes
Characters/Pairings: Sylar/Heidi, Peter
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,983
Summary: What do you do when you discover the man you thought was your husband is actually your husband's murderer?
Previous Chapters: 1, 2
Notes: This is set in the "Five Years Gone" universe and takes place after that

Comments

[albion1919]

HOLY FUCK YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT THERE!! NO WAY! MORE!!!

OH that was fantastic, I was on edge through the whole thing, especially the letter.

it makes you feel omnipresent, almost omniscient. Kind of like God. Or maybe Santa Claus.

LOL! It reminded me of Gabe ^_^

Who knows, I might be standing beside you right now, as you’re reading this letter.

Creepy. As. Fuck. I'm wondering now if Peter wasn't him all along, how would she know?

Oh please write more, I'm dying to see them interact! *puppy eyes*

[fifmeister]

Hehe! Well, this is it for this particular fic, but I have an idea or two floating around for a potential sequel where they actually do interact. :p

It reminded me of Gabe ^_^

LOL, what doesn't remind you of Gabe? ;)

I'm wondering now if Peter wasn't him all along, how would she know?

Whoaaa, that is seriously creepy! I have to admit, I didn't even think of that. Too bad, because it's an awesome idea!

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm really glad you enjoyed this whole thing. :D

[razycrandomgirl]

I'm wondering now if Peter wasn't him all along, how would she know?

Whoaaa, that is seriously creepy! I have to admit, I didn't even think of that. Too bad, because it's an awesome idea!

I thought that's what you were doing. I thought maybe Peter wasn't really Peter. poor Heidi. :(

[fifmeister]

Sadly, I'm not that clever. :p Peter is Peter in this fic, in my head at least--I figure poor Heidi's been through enough; she needs at least some genuine support. But hey, if you want to interpret it differently, go right ahead! ;)

[sinemoras09]

OH MY FUCKING GOD BETH YOU NEED TO POST THIS BITCH!!!!

Seriously. Holy shit, girl, this is SO GOOD! WHY you're keeping this friends locked is just plain CRAZY--you need to pimp this out. Hell, *I* need to pimp this out!!

oh dude, this was so creepy and hot and I can just IMAGINE the terror on Heidi's face, knowing that he could be watching her at ANY time. SCARY! Of course, in my soppy shippy mind, I'm pretending she'll cave in and love him again (of course we both know that won't happen--he killed her husband! Even though Nathan was a jackass, it's still unforgivable).

:LSKDFJa;lskfdja;d *flails*

SOOO good. You should at least post this to rare_heroes, I mean, C'MON.

*pokes Beth with stick*

LOL.

[fifmeister]

Okay, okay, you win! Just no more pokings! :p I'll unlock it and do a little crossposting probably sometime tomorrow. (I actually have it filtered so you, Tammy and Cana are the only people on my flist who can see it, LOL.)

Haha, I almost feel a little weird calling it a Sylar/Heidi fic, since the attraction is so necessarily one-sided. But I actually would like to dig a little deeper into what the relationship was like before he was discovered--i.e., how much of it was him acting like Nathan and how much of it was actually real. Fodder for another fic, perhaps. :p

Thank you muchly for commenting! *flappy hands of glee*

[sinemoras09]

Well lemme know when you post it, I plan to rec you on my journal (unless you don't want me too, in which case I'll just beat you with a virtual stick and tell you you're being silly :)

One-sided Sydi FTW \o/

[fifmeister]

Hee! Being recced makes me ridiculously happy for like a week straight, so I'll let you know once it's unlocked. ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

oh no...
this is so sad...
I think I would have killed myself just to get away.

Poor Heidi.

This is soooooo haunting. :(

[fifmeister]

Aww, it's not supposed to be that depressing! *hugs* Thank you for reading! :)

[razycrandomgirl]

It wasn't? I'd hate to see you try. *shudders*

You did an awesome job BTW. :)

[fifmeister]

*FLAIL* Thank you so much! Your comment seriously made my day. I'm really glad you liked it! :D

I kind of had one of those OMG NOT MOLLY moments lol

Hehe, I confess I had a similar reaction as I was writing it. ;) *squeezes Molly*

[rotten_fish]

WHY MUST THIS END. WHY. THIS IS FANTASTIC.

i thought the big reveal was that Peter was Sylar all along

GOD SYLAR IS A CREEPY MOTHERFUCKER. BRILLIANT. THIS IS BRILLIANT. GOOD JOB.

[fifmeister]

i thought the big reveal was that Peter was Sylar all along

I must have screwed up somewhere along the way, because you're the third person to tell me that, but the idea honestly never crossed my mind. *facepalm* :p It would have been awesomely creepy, though!

Thank you so much for reading! :D