Awww this was wonderful. I could see them all together with this wonderful banter and closeness. I adore the way Dom and Elijah can be around them. It allows Elijah such freedom to show his love for Dom and to feel Dom's love in the slight touches and kisses. I would think it would be wonderful for all to witness. I also really liked the end and how we could really see how out of it he had been feeling with this group because of his guilt. He still wants to be Elijah's big brother there, Frodo's Sam, but he has felt undeserving. Hopefully it will go back to normal and he can also enjoy the glow he sees from the love eminating from Elijah and Dom.
I have been looking for another chapter of this. I love it. hugs you xoxoox v
Omg... I'm so in love with this story ! It's so well written and seems so real ! I love how they all have this close frendship, how you picture Viggo as a father-figure to Elijah ! And that scene between Billy and Sean... wonderful !
I was really looking forward to another chapter of this, and it came out brilliant ! Thanks =) !
Sean's feelings of guilt and being outside of the group are understandable, I'd probably feel pretty awkward if I'd behaved the way he had, but hopefully Billy has given him the nudge he needs.
I also liked Elijah thinking of Viggo as a father figure.
Sorry for the late comment but RL has been kinda hectic lately and I didn't find the time to read the chapter before today. I am so far behind on my reading, it's not even funny anymore;)
Anyway, really liked the chapter! Loved how you portrayed the interactions in the group and the friendships they all share!
Also loved Billy! Big surprise there;) Just have a soft spot for the Scot*lol*
Let's hope Sean is going to listen to Billy and that things will change for the better!
Great chapter and I can't wait to find the time to read the next one:)
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I have been looking for another chapter of this. I love it. hugs you xoxoox v
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I love how they all have this close frendship, how you picture Viggo as a father-figure to Elijah ! And that scene between Billy and Sean... wonderful !
I was really looking forward to another chapter of this, and it came out brilliant ! Thanks =) !
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Sean's feelings of guilt and being outside of the group are understandable, I'd probably feel pretty awkward if I'd behaved the way he had, but hopefully Billy has given him the nudge he needs.
I also liked Elijah thinking of Viggo as a father figure.
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Anyway, really liked the chapter! Loved how you portrayed the interactions in the group and the friendships they all share!
Also loved Billy! Big surprise there;) Just have a soft spot for the Scot*lol*
Let's hope Sean is going to listen to Billy and that things will change for the better!
Great chapter and I can't wait to find the time to read the next one:)
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