Creative Non-Fiction: Windows to My Past (1/1)

[fiddlings]

Title: Windows to My Past
Genre: Creative non-fiction
Summary: It's still new, still crisp, a fine layer of gloss bouncing the light back into my eyes so that I cannot quite make out the details of the background.
Notes: For intoevenings challenge #2 - The pictures you never took but will always see. This is my first attempt at creative non-fiction. I can

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[phoenix39]

[fiddlings]

♥ Thank you!

[stop_theworld]

This is amazing. I've always loved writing like this, the personal narrative with a creative spin. Playing with your voice. I've done workshops like this in the summer, and they truly made me realize that everyone is a writer, given the right circumstances.

Anyway! I love this line: He has brown hair, tanned skin, and a lean body that deserves a second glance. I'm a sucker for threes, especially where the third item changes the tone a little. I love the bit about the other people having faded out of the photo, since it's a photo of the mind. And sldkfjsf, as it is always near the top LOVE THAT. I love how You know the one I mean and Yeah. That one draw the reader right in on a personal level.

The last line is perfect. Mem'ing this, totally.

[fiddlings]

Wow, thank you so much! :)

[fiddlings]

Thank you. :)

[backtograce]

Meming to read this later~

Can't wait, new friend! SO EXCITED. =D

[fiddlings]

Can't wait, new friend! SO EXCITED. =D

ME TOO.

AND GAH, PHANTOM. Could you be any more awesome? I mean, really? :D

[backtograce]

Could you be any more awesome? I mean, really? :D

Just to sound egotistical, I'm going to say NO. But, you know, I probably could.

BUT, AS FRIENDS, WE WILL BE MORE AWESOME TOGETHER.

[fiddlings]

IT'S TRUE. WE WILL.

[backtograce]

This was gorgeous. I was in tears (but laughed at the Bring It On reference!). Great job. =]

[fiddlings]

♥ Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Haha, yeah, every time I see that move, I think of Eliza Dushku (well, I'm sure it wasn't really her, but still.) in Bring It On.

[backtograce]

If, you know, I WATCHED or whatever cheerleading and saw that move, I'd think of her too.

"I got bored in fifth period." Or whatever class it was. =/

[fiddlings]

LMAO. Well, I was thinking more of Olympics gymnastics...but if I watched cheerleading, I'm sure I would then, too.

Fourth period. But close. :D (I am kind of ashamed of how well I know this movie...)