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Drabble: Surrender (1/1)

Oct 02, 2007 20:00

Title: Surrender
Author: ibreak4csi
Characters: Peter, Claire
Challenge: Challenge #12: Breakdown
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Implied incest. My first contribution to pairechallenge; I hope you enjoy!

( There's a point when he just can't stand it any more. )

fic: heroes, fandom: heroes, pairing: peter/claire, fic

Comments 8

joanna_484 October 3 2007, 13:26:25 UTC

Lovely first challenge entry :) I love this kind of Peter breakdown *lol*

fiddlings October 3 2007, 13:28:32 UTC

Hee. Me, too. :D Thanks!

riane_71 October 3 2007, 16:29:17 UTC

This was wonderful! Love how they broke down together.

fiddlings October 3 2007, 16:38:42 UTC

Thank you! ♥

michelsita October 3 2007, 18:21:48 UTC

Lovealy!

They break to become one, they break to fix themselves into something unexpected and beautiful.
Love the idea and the imaginery.

Good work! ;)

fiddlings October 4 2007, 04:29:05 UTC

Exactly what I was going for. Glad you liked it! Thanks for your review! :D

ronniekins77 October 8 2007, 21:04:29 UTC

Ohhh, this was so wonderful! I'm so glad you've decided to start posting at the comm, because this drabble is great! I love the imagery of Claire's cotton candy eyes. So sweet (no pun intended, LOL.) I love how the thought of hurling off a building normally goes hand in hand with dying, but in this case, he wants to hurl himself off a building into Claire's arms, which signifies life...or, well, I guess it could signify death if that's the angle you're going for. Either way, loved the symbolism. I look forward to seeing more of your entries!

fiddlings October 8 2007, 21:09:16 UTC

Wow, thanks for your review!! *blushes* I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)