Fic - A Turbulence of Forms

Jun 30, 2009 13:57

A Turbulence of Forms // Brendon/Multiple Couples, Brendon/Sarah O. // NC-17 // 9,200 words

Authors Notes: This was written for Sweet Charity, for strina, who had this prompt at her journal: Brendon is surrounded by couples. Who keep asking him for threesomes. And he keeps saying yes, because hey, threesomes! But no one wants to keep him. And then ( Read more... )

brendon/spencer/haley, brendon/ryan/keltie, brendon/shane/regan, p!atd, brendon/jon/cassie, brendon/jac/audrey, bandom fic, brendon/sarah

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ericaplease June 30 2009, 22:08:39 UTC
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I just really love the way you portrayed each encounter differently, especially Brendon's interactions with Sarah. you also did a pretty fantastic job of constructing Brendon as the knowledgeable character when it came to having sexy threesomes, all while maintaining his sense of confusion and the feeling that he was not so knowledgeable in other areas. so sweet!

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fiddleyoumust June 30 2009, 22:33:00 UTC

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fiddleyoumust June 30 2009, 22:32:17 UTC
Thank you!

Sarah O. is Brendon's current girlfriend. She used to date the guitarist for Paramore (Jeremy).

She looks like this:


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vic_ramsey June 30 2009, 22:26:10 UTC
I really liked this Julia. Each of Brendon's threesomes was a little heartbreaking in their own way. I really loved how he met Sarah and how he decided to stay to get to know her.

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akinamiyoko July 1 2009, 00:21:16 UTC
Hey! I just wanted to say that I really liked this fic. Actually I've always like your fics. <3 I love how Brendon's always on the outside looking in, and I love the dynamics of the couples interacting with him and each other (the Spencer/Haley scene was so heartbreaking... yet so good).

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mrsquizzical July 1 2009, 02:26:29 UTC
oh poor brendon! that was lovely and sort of sad and hot at the same time. it's nice to think it ended happily. and i liked how he realised that maybe he didn't share well afterall.

nicely done.

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