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Fic: Progress (A First Time For Everything)

Nov 20, 2010 07:08

Title: Progress (A First Time For Everything)
Author: meself, fid_gin
Beta: unfolded73
Pairing: Tenth Doctor/Rose
Rating: R for sexual situations
Disclaimer: I own nothing, all hail the BBC
Summary: Stuck on Earth for the evening, the Doctor and Rose try something new for both of them.
Notes: FinSoFicMo strikes again! This time it's yet another incident-at- ( Read more... )

fic, finsoficmo!, smut, tenth doctor fic, doctor fic

Comments 55

develish1 November 20 2010, 16:11:33 UTC

your Beta is right, that is hot. Well done, you made something that could have been icky into something very sweet

fid_gin November 28 2010, 17:27:20 UTC

Thank you much! It's a bit of an odd idea, true...glad I pulled it off! :)

wildwinterwitch November 20 2010, 16:21:20 UTC

I loved it. It was hot and sweet, not at all squicky. Rose is so sad when she realises that there aren't many firsts left for him, but then they discover each other in this refreshingly new way. Also, it suits the beginning to perfectly, that everything Rose does is slightly different.

Thank you for sharing this.

fid_gin November 28 2010, 17:27:59 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!

papilio_luna November 20 2010, 16:31:10 UTC

D: I'm about to get in a car and drive 3 hours with my non-stop whining dog, and then spend the night with BOTH MY MOMS (regular and in-law variety) heaven help me. I will save this until before bed tonight becuase GOD KNOWS I AM GOING TO NEED SOMETHING TO UNWIND.

papilio_luna November 24 2010, 01:57:11 UTC

Late comment is late as usual. There was no usable internets at my in-laws house so I had to wait til I got back, and then when I read it, I was reclining in a way that made it awkward to type, so I thought, "That's okay, I'll just comment later." And then promptly forgot all about it.

ANYWAY mutual wanking may not be everyone's kink but IT IS SO TOTALLY MINE. So, *thumbs up* on that score because whoa hot. I love me some first-times, too, so basically I so completely approve of this fic and everything it stands for. Mmmf.

fid_gin November 28 2010, 17:29:44 UTC

then when I read it, I was reclining in a way that made it awkward to type

*snort* This made me LOL when I read this comment the first time, because I am 12. :)

Thanks much as always, I'm so glad you liked it! I hadn't really thought about this being a kink of mine prior to writing this, but once I'd settled on the idea it wouldn't go away and I love how it turned out.

spellweaver731 November 20 2010, 17:42:36 UTC

Guh...is it weird that I have a bit of a kink for mutual masturbation? I was so happy when I saw that you had posted this. So hot. Wow. Plus is was incredibly sweet and just so them. You always capture their voices and actions so well.

fid_gin November 28 2010, 17:30:40 UTC

Thank you so much! It is wonderful to hear that I've captured their voices all right, especially when throwing them into scenarios like this one. :)

shan21non November 20 2010, 18:10:19 UTC

How did you do that? How did you take a plot that should seem totally OOC and make is absolutely believable and even funny at some points? The Doctor was still his maddening, odd self and Rose was absolutely Rose. Also, GUH.

fid_gin November 28 2010, 17:31:52 UTC

Thank you!!! This is exactly what I love to hear, because it does seem like a totally OOC plot but, by god, I'm pleased with how it came out. :)