Comments | ficwriter1966: SPN FIC

ficwriter1966

SPN FIC - Pilgrim

Nov 07, 2007 20:57

This is a little early for Thanksgiving, but I don't figure anyone will object. Have some Wee!Chesters, some angst, and an outsider POV.

Characters: Dean (age 9), Sam (age 5), OFC, OMC
Pairings: none
Length: 2940 words
Rating: G
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: just playing, as usual

Sam got up from the glider and moved silently into place beside the ( Read more... )

wee!sam, wee!dean, holiday, thanksgiving, outsider pov

Comments 122

ex_egorstan November 8 2007, 02:18:59 UTC

aaaawwwwwwwwwwww!!

Love outside POV's.

And Sam, already whiney at the age of 5 and Dean so protective.

Thanks for sharing!

ficwriter1966 November 8 2007, 02:58:30 UTC

I knew outsider POVs were popular, so I thought this would do well for Thanksgiving.

You're welcome!

squirreller November 8 2007, 02:23:58 UTC

Well you made ME cry. Real live, snotty-nose tears.

Really well-written, excellent short piece. I loved it. Thank you for posting it.

ficwriter1966 November 8 2007, 02:59:05 UTC

Oh, noes! Not the messy-Sam-crying...

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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ficwriter1966 November 8 2007, 02:59:22 UTC

Thanks!

mitchsgirl November 8 2007, 02:33:17 UTC

He was nobody’s honey.

Hee! And also, after a second thought, awwww...

Suddenly, he made her think of The Princess Bride. “My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.”

Y'know, I've never even seen that movie, but I can still picture the look on Wee!Dean's face. Eleven feet tall, indeed.

ficwriter1966 November 8 2007, 02:57:34 UTC

Go here:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=KKbmA5qoE18
It's the relevant clip. But actually, you should rent the whole movie, because it's AWESOME.

Glad you liked the story!

mitchsgirl November 8 2007, 14:25:51 UTC

Thanks for that! LOL!

You're not the first to tell me I need to watch that movie--I remember when it came out when I was a kid. Seems like I was the only one who didn't see it!

ficwriter1966 November 10 2007, 14:50:13 UTC

You should definitely rent it sometime, when you want something light and fun to watch. It really is funny, and there are so many quotable lines!

innie_darling November 8 2007, 02:34:15 UTC

The bit where Dean took charge of Sammy's tissue really got me.

ficwriter1966 November 8 2007, 03:01:11 UTC

I figure if they'd been alone, he'd probably be okay with Sammy wiping his nose on his hand. But in front of a teacher... gotta step up and be the kleenex jockey.