SPN FIC - Heat

[ficwriter1966]

How long he's been sitting over there in the dark, she doesn't know.  He blends in with the night, like a cat.  Like that long black car he tends so lovingly.

CHARACTERS:  Dean (age 19), OFC
GENRE:  Het (Outsider POV)
RATING:  PG
SPOILERS:  None
LENGTH:  1000 words

Comments

[tifaching]

Lovely and so very Dean.

[ficwriter1966]

Thank you! It was a problematic little thing - I had it all worked out in my head before I got up this morning, then sat down with the laptop and all the wordies had flown right out of my head. But I got 'em back. :)

[phebemarie]

I could almost feel the humidity (and believe me, the West coast is rarely humid). I especially like the shift when Dean remembers what's really out there in the night.

Thanks for spicing it up on this Independence Day morning.

:)

[ficwriter1966]

Really? I remember a visit to Portland in 1979 - stayed for a week with a friend and her family. It was WET. I remember her mom constantly fanning her face, saying, "It's so sultry. It's just so sultry." (It became a joke between me and my mom - whenever it would get humid, we'd say, "It's too sultry! Becky's mom wouldn't like this!")

Anyway. The Muse got all steamy this morning. Glad you liked it!

[phebemarie]

I'm about four hours south of Portland and a little closer to the ocean so humidity here is sort of tuned to non-existent most of the time. :)

[ficwriter1966]

Ah! Well there you go. Maybe Becky's mother should have moved down there, poor thing.

Enjoy it - it's muggy here, and I am *no* big fan of this stuff. Although it did prompt some fic.

[borgmama1of5]

Wow!

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! :)

[saberivojo]

I love this. Maybe it's the heat we've been having.

It's amazing the images you evoke, the heat, the closeness of the houses, the second floor balcony. Dean and his mad climbing skills.

I love the voyeuristic approach you've managed to write, without all the accompanying sex. It's there. Sex outside on a balcony? Smoking hot in more ways than one.

I loved too the outsider POV. We never really know this girl but we get a great look into Dean.

Perfect.

[ficwriter1966]

See, this is how I like to write Het - leaving a lot of things up to the imagination. 'Cause you all know how Tab A fits into Slot B. And there's only so many ways you can describe that. I love doing the setup, and a little "fade to black."

We've got a LOT of old houses around here, with those big second floor open porches. It's not difficult to imagine teen!Dean climbing on up there to get him some nookie!

Glad I could perk up the holiday for ya!

[morganslady]

This was simply beautiful!!

[ficwriter1966]

Thank you! :)