SPN FIC - Bus Me (Part 4 of 4)

Mar 17, 2012 13:55

It's been a long six months, hiding out in abandoned houses, eating cold Hot Pockets and mourning the loss of the ones they love. So Dean signs himself and Sam up for what amounts to a little R&R: a six-day chartered bus tour. On a haunted bus. Destination: Dollywood. But what starts out as a simple case (a series of mysterious injuries that all ( Read more... )

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irismay42 March 17 2012, 18:32:08 UTC
They found Ricky!!!! Yay! (And Dean. Obviously.)

How awesome would a tour led by Dean Winchester be? (Even to Dollywood!) Yeah, Sam, get on the bus. The rest of us would follow Dean to the ends of the earth, you can do the same!

Really enjoyed this whole story, and particularly liked the way the boys (Dean in particular) interacted with the 'normal people' on the bus, and how you wrote the ghost as sympathetic rather than evil. Even if he did spend the night bouncing Dean off the wall!

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ficwriter1966 March 17 2012, 22:15:58 UTC
I had to rescue poor wee Ricky! He needs to get back into his day-glo orange tote bag and go home to do his teedlies.

I would love to be on a bus tour with Dean - he is KING at entertaining the restless masses. Although there's no way I'd get on that Wild Eagle ride. I'd be standing alongside Dean down on the ground, watching Sammy hurl.

Glad you enjoyed the fic - I had a lot of fun writing it!

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tattooeddevil March 17 2012, 18:35:44 UTC
This absolutely made my entire weekend! <3 Loved it to bits! I am with Sam aaaallll the way, hell couldn't possibly worse than the Dollywood tour bus, lol! Poor, poor Sam *pets him* Absolutely adore this, thanks for sharing!!

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ficwriter1966 March 17 2012, 22:16:39 UTC
You're very welcome! I thought a fun little romp was in order, and I had a blast writing it - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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ficwriter1966 March 17 2012, 22:16:55 UTC
You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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borgmama1of5 March 17 2012, 19:57:59 UTC
Sam, Sam, Sam...let your brother have some fun, he deserves it :)

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ficwriter1966 March 17 2012, 22:17:34 UTC
They both do! Particularly if there's Twelve-Pound Pizza and Skillet Taters involved. *g*

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pielover62 March 17 2012, 20:11:38 UTC
I'm smiling at the end of this. I think that says it all. This was just wonderful. Maybe I didn't get to see dancing Dean, but Dean as Bus Tour Captain to Dollywood works just fine! "Busty Asian Beauties" ain't got nothin' on her!

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ficwriter1966 March 17 2012, 22:19:08 UTC
That's very true! (I have this mental picture of Dean on that first bus tour he didn't want to tell Sam about, being swept into a bear hug by Dolly.)

I'm glad you enjoyed it - these little fun romps are a real treat to work on. :)

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