SPN FIC - Bus Me (Part 3 of 4)

[ficwriter1966]

It's been a long six months, hiding out in abandoned houses, eating cold Hot Pockets and mourning the loss of the ones they love. So Dean signs himself and Sam up for what amounts to a little R&R: a six-day chartered bus tour. On a haunted bus. Destination: Dollywood.  But what starts out as a simple case (a series of mysterious injuries that all

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[ficwriter1966]

We finish up tomorrow. That soon enough? :)

[phebemarie]

I really enjoyed this update. I liked the image of Sam with a flock of elderly ducklings trailing behind him. The dialogue between Sam and Charlie McGraw was both charming and funny. Thanks for sharing. :)

[ficwriter1966]

The mental image of Jared surrounded by all these fussy old people in their nightwear (and one old guy in boxer shorts) cracked me up while I was working on this! I haven't had such fun with a fic in quite a while - glad you're enjoying it!

[auntmo9]

Sam's been to Hell, but is overwhelmed by a group of tired, overly excitable, colorfully dressed seniors on a trip to an overpriced, re-vamped former Silver Dollar City. Welcome to my world Sam Winchester!

[ficwriter1966]

Don't forget the missing doggie!

Yep, Sam is gonna need a break when this is over. I hope you get one this weekend as well!

Bus Me (3)

[catsintheattic]

Sam's continuing thoughts about hell as a reaction to being surrounded by the elderly people were hilarious. And the image of him being so much taller than everybody else worked great. :-D

Re: Bus Me (3)

[ficwriter1966]

I could really see the woeful!Sammy face going on as I was writing this - poor Sam. :(

Glad you're enjoying it! Final chapter coming later today.

[rince1wind]

I love case-ficus. I can't wait for more of this one!

[ficwriter1966]

Cool! Final chapter coming later today. :)