SPN FIC - Deluge (Part 4 of 5)

Mar 26, 2011 15:13

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anonymous March 26 2011, 19:57:05 UTC
Ooh...the action is about to start!!!
I can literally feel the rain--the deluge!--that is going on, can see Dean pacing, see the looks Sam is giving him--that's how awesome your writing is!

I already like Nell!! I hope she makes it through this and doesn't become "cannon fodder" herself!

I hope Dean gets to blow something up!!!

Very much looking forward to part 5!!!!

m.

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ficwriter1966 March 26 2011, 20:38:33 UTC
Yup, serious action coming up! I've (Finally!!!) got it all outlined, so that last chapter should be pretty smooth to put together.

Glad you like Nell! She popped up all of a sudden, wanting a big role in the resolution, and I didn't dare argue with her. *g*

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tifaching March 26 2011, 20:16:08 UTC
I love that Nell smiles in a way that makes Sam's hackles rise. Also love pacing, drenched, stoked to blow things up Dean.

Are they going to sing to the wahwee? Because that would be awesome. ;D

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ficwriter1966 March 26 2011, 20:39:56 UTC
There will be singing! And blowing up of stuff. It took a lot of mental wrangling to figure out the big battle sequence, but I think it's gonna be good. Stay tuned!

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phebemarie March 26 2011, 21:02:22 UTC
Sam's people skills, sorely lacking in the beginning of season 6, really shine in your dialogue. Despite my personal Dean preference, I like seeing this through Sam's eyes. His compassion for people and concern for his brother are his best qualities, which you've captured beautifully. Can't wait for part 5.

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ficwriter1966 March 26 2011, 22:05:14 UTC
Thanks! I had to watch a few of the older episodes to get back into a pro-Sam groove - this season sure didn't do much to keep me on his side, and that needed some fixing.

Glad you enjoyed this part - it was fun to write, and I'm looking forward to digging into the final chapter!

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ald_fan_girl March 26 2011, 21:06:36 UTC
I nearly jumped off of my bed at seeing there was another chapter. I was sooooo flipping excited! Another comercial break. *sigh* I guess I'll wait again. lol

Amazing writing and I love this story! Keep up the amazing work please!

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ficwriter1966 March 26 2011, 22:06:10 UTC
Hee! I couldn't ask for a more positive response than that. :)

Thanks for the kind words!

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luvwinchesters March 26 2011, 22:19:14 UTC
Yes! Another chapter! Love caffeinated Dean out in the parking lot, wanting to blow something up! And Nell is awesome, but then I always love your OCs. Can't wait for all the action to start!!

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ficwriter1966 March 26 2011, 22:21:47 UTC
Thanks! This chapter was a toughie - I just couldn't decide how the boys should (or could) tackle this critter. But I must have given the Muse sufficient quantities of chocolate, because she came up with the solution, so the finish line is in sight. *does the Snoopy Happy Dance*

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