SPN FIC - Deluge (Part 3 of 5)

[ficwriter1966]

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[phebemarie]

Terrific chapter. It seems a bit like 'the calm before the storm'. You've done a great job establishing atmosphere (I could almost smell the hash browns and bacon...or maybe I'm just hungry).

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! I was originally going to get into a bit of action, but the Muse convinced me to save it for the next chapter. Stay tuned...

[irismay42]

Oh my goodness, they're trapped in the middle of a storm with a giant Australian alligator monster stalking them! Gah!

Great chapter, very atmospheric and foreboding!

[ficwriter1966]

Thank you! Yep, things could get problematic any moment now...

[ald_fan_girl]

Gah! I love it! Keep it coming. It's absolutely amazing. It's like holding your breath when the stupid commercial break happens. Now I gotta wait for the rest.

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. :)

[luvwinchesters]

Yea! Another chapter! And now I'm thinking the "fun" is going to begin, right? Love how you paint with words, makes me feel like I'm watching the whole thing play out. I'm already nervous for them all! Also, loved that bit about Dean's love for the Impala and him being a little boy who played with racecars and how that thought made Sam's stomach hurt....I love little details like that. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

[ficwriter1966]

I'm definitely having fun with it - when the Muse is cooperating! She seems to like working on Saturdays, and I can play along with that. :)

Glad you're enjoying it! Feels good to be back at it again.

[saberivojo]

Great new chapter! I love Dean all grumpy and tired. It makes me want to give him cookies and send him to bed.

A wahwee? How in the hell do you come up with this stuff?

[ficwriter1966]

All these critters are in the demon handbook. Definitely an excellent little resource to have!

I love writing grumpy Dean. Or silly Dean. Or heroic Dean. Just about any flavor of Dean. You may have noticed that. *g*